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#26
Old 09-06-2007, 06:03 AM

PRETEND
Pretend, pretend
You are my friend.
Pretend you'll stay
Until the end.
And when I need you
The very most
Pretend to be
To be a ghost.
Do not help me
When I call.
Do not catch me
When I fall.
Take my kindness
Use it up.
Drink my friendship
From a cup.
Pretend, pretend
You are my friend.
Pretend you'll stay
Until the end.

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#27
Old 09-06-2007, 06:08 AM

SWEET TEA
Sugar, Sugar
in my tea.
How many spoon fulls
will it be?
One, Two
Three, Four...
Fairly sweet
But I need more!
Five, six
Seven, Eight
Getting sweeter
Doing great!
Nine, ten
Stop then!
Way too sweet!
Let's try again...

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#28
Old 09-06-2007, 06:11 AM

MY HORSE
I ride my horse
Across the sea
I love my horse
My horse loves me
My horse can swim
And that's because
It is a seahorse
That I love

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#29
Old 09-06-2007, 06:19 AM

MY HOUSE
I live in a house
It's humble and small
There's yellow paint
Upon my wall
The photos hang
from rusty nails
And my garden houses
Many snails
There's just one story
My kitchen's tiny
But the tiles
Are so shiny
There's just one loo
And one bedroom
I sweep the front porch
With a broken broom
My bed is a cot
And my ceiling gets dusty
Because my step ladder
is old and rusty
But I love my house
And I call it home
And never would I choose
From it to roam

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#30
Old 09-06-2007, 09:21 PM

FORCED INTO SILENCE
Don't speak, little one
Or I shall sew up your lips.
Don't speak, at all
Or I shall cut out your tongue.
Do not question me
For I am your superior
Just do as I say
Do not pause to think.
I have been given power.
It is not for you to ask why.
I shall use it as I like.
And you must accept it.
Do not speak, child
Or I shall take your words.
Do not utter a sound.
Or I shall silence you forever.

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#31
Old 09-07-2007, 03:11 AM

DANCE, BALLERINA
You are my little ballerina
You dance away my sorrow
As long as the key is wound
You'll dance all through the 'morrow
Dance to pretty music notes
And spin away my tears
And when I close the music box
I lock away my fears

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#32
Old 09-08-2007, 03:39 AM

DRIFT AWAY
Drift away, my dolly
On your little paper boat
And I shall wish for sunshine
So that you may stay afloat
And when you drift ashore
And find yourself a love
Send one back to me as well
Upon the wings of a dove

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#33
Old 09-08-2007, 04:45 PM

SAY WHAT YOU MEAN
You say you love me
As you're pushing me away.
You turn your back from me
As you're telling me to stay.
You walk away from me
As you ask me not to leave.
But your actions make your words
A challenge to believe...

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#34
Old 09-09-2007, 12:07 AM

THE PARTY
Fancy dresses
Curly tresses
Dance the night away
Diamond rings
And fancy things
The orchestra will play
Wine and cheeses
Spring time breezes
We will all be gay
Cheerful chatter
Idle prater
Till the coming day

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#35
Old 09-10-2007, 07:05 PM

You have extremely great rhyming skills, especially since these are five minute poems. ^^ Nice job hun, I'm thoroughly impressed. <3

I hope you don't mind me saying so. XD <3

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Old 09-11-2007, 12:10 AM

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You have extremely great rhyming skills, especially since these are five minute poems. ^^ Nice job hun, I'm thoroughly impressed. <3

I hope you don't mind me saying so. XD <3
Oh wow, thanks haha ^.^; I saw that someone had posted here and I was confused and surprized all at once ^.^; I didn't think anyone even looked at this thread ^.^; I appreciate your compliments ^.^ It makes me happy to know someone enjoyed my babbles ^.^;

Some of the poems took closer to 7 or 8 minutes, but some took only 2 or 3... So I figure it evens out and averages at about 5 minutes ^.^;

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Old 09-11-2007, 06:01 AM

They are really well done, and you're welcome. ^^ I'm pretty okay at rhyming, but I do my best at freeverse so I stick with that. XD But for even less than ten minutes, these are pretty well done. ^^ <3

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#38
Old 09-14-2007, 01:42 AM

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THE OLD TREE
Withered, gnarled
Abandoned, spent
No atonement, no repent
Slashed and twisted
Pushed, mislead
And left to suffer
Till it's dead...
This made me very sad. I'm a very nature oriented person and it just reminds me of all the needless destruction wrought upon our planet. You really are quite good, I want you to know.

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Old 09-16-2007, 05:11 AM

Aeris - Thanks ^.^ I used to write poetry when I got bored when I was in grade school ^.^; (Which was quite often)...They stuck me in the advanced writing classes but I just figured it was a fluke >.>;

Choir-Angel - Thank you. I'm glad you liked it ^.^ I really appreciate your comment.

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#40
Old 09-16-2007, 05:18 AM

THE QUEEN OF SPADES
The queen of spades
Was tall and slim
And her face was always
Pale and grim
She dressed in black
From head to toe
Her walk was always
Eerily slow
The bones within
Her fingers showed
And her knees
Were thin and bowed
Her subjects feared her
But they knew
Her enemies
All feared her too
And so they did not
Think it mean
To be blessed
With such a Queen

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#41
Old 09-19-2007, 03:52 AM

TAKE IT AT FACE VALUE
Twist my words
And taint my meaning
Say my sentence
Was demeaning
Make me out
To be a fool
Manipulation
Can be cruel
Do you think
It's fun to say
What I meant
From what I say?
Do you enjoy
Twisting around
Every word
And every sound?
Or must you just
reflect on me
What you really
Want to see?

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#42
Old 10-03-2007, 11:42 PM

REGRETS OF YOU
Wishing I hadn't
Sacrificed my time
Wishing I'd never
Put my life on the line
Wishing you would of
Appreciated my strife
Wishing I hadn't
Wasted my life

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#43
Old 10-04-2007, 03:20 AM

LINDA LEE
Linda Lee, Her magesty
Always dressed her best for tea.
A spoiled princess through and through
Who always was a 'well to do'.
It must be 'her' the gossip is of
And it must be 'her' the boys all love.
"Lovely Linda" they'll all cheer
Because that's all Linda wants to hear.

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#44
Old 10-04-2007, 03:24 AM

GOODBYE
Farewell, Goodbye,
I bid adou
These parting words
Are all for you
For I've grown tired
of "Hello"s
And I have tried,
Heaven knows.
But all you'll ever
Want to hear
Is the sound of me walking
Away from here.
I know you wait
With beating heart
For the day
I shall depart.
And so adios
My 'welcome's been spent
And so away
Away I'm sent.

 


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