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Old 07-17-2007, 07:56 PM

Quick blurb about my poetry. All my poems I write are finished in a matter of seconds or minutes. When I write I just let the words pour from my finger tips inspired by a burst of emotions. I don't spend a lot of time on a poem because thats just not my style. It is mainly all emotion based so it may not follow everyones standards of poetry writing. But in my opinion, poetry is an art form and should not have to follow a set of rules and guidelines. It is an expression that can be interpreted in many different ways by whoever is reading it. So if I don't write like you think a poet should. Then I'm sorry but please move on to someone else because I will not change any of my work. Thanks for reading anyways!

but if you are interested in reading some of my stories pm me. well here is my first poem i ever wrote:

Mother and Child

I was there for you.
Took care of you.
Helped support you.
Cried for you.
All these years.

I gave it all up for you.
Stayed around for you.
Could never leave you.
Never would cry in front of you.
Only showed my smile.

Now where are you?
I need you.
Even when I look around I don’t see you.
How could it be like there was no you?
You were my mother and I was your child.

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Old 07-18-2007, 02:15 AM

Wow, thats a really nice poem. ^^

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Old 07-18-2007, 02:44 AM

Thanks here is my next one:

Lost

The quiet darkness encases her.
Suffocating till no breath exists.
Lonely and tired of fighting.
Lost within an unease mind.

The light grows dimmer still.
The wind flees in disgust.
Nothing touches the lost little girl,
That rests deep within.

There she will remain.
Too blind to see her way.
Invisible to the world around her.
A lost and lonely soul.

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Old 07-18-2007, 04:51 PM

Accident

Tears fall like rain.
Washing the blood away.
Ears numb to the sound.
Lights flashing all around.

As you cry out his name.
Your skin pales to snowy white.
Eyes glossed over.
Head feels heavy upon one’s shoulder.

A voice whispers within your mind.
“Hush please don’t cry.
Though my heart may beat no longer.
I remain in yours always and forever.”

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Old 07-19-2007, 05:12 AM

True Love

Your eyes hold mine in waiting.
Revealing yourself to me.
Neither lies nor uncertainty.
Forever we will be.

I feel your lips gently brush the ones you seek.
As we consensual agree.
Many emotions consume us both.
As together we fall as one.

Skin against skin, I feel your warmth.
Hearts beating in a syncopated rhythm.
Your hand grabs for mine.
Love’s eternal promise.

You are everything to me.

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Old 07-19-2007, 05:12 PM

Troubled

I give.
You take.
I only ask for little.
Help along the way.

Empty inside.
I come to you.
Pleading for guidance.
Yet you turn away.

Used and abused.
Still empty and alone.
You return and I hope.
But in the end I give some more.

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Old 07-20-2007, 04:56 AM

Change

With time comes change.
The leaves of the trees.
The course of a storm.
The mind and heart.

Though we may part now.
It shall not be forever.
The wind will return you to me.
So we can be together.

It may not seem plausible.
Though we may change.
As the years pass us by.
But remember one thing.

In our hearts, together we remain.

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#8
Old 07-26-2007, 08:04 PM

Happiness

I’m falling fast.
No one to catch me.
No soft gentle landing.
Without a care in the world.

This feeling inside.
Has been absent too long.
I almost forgot how it felt.
Complete happiness.

Though it may not be,
Equally shared.
I’ll keep it inside.
And bare it.

For all I feel is happiness.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:05 PM

Invisible

I see you.
You don’t see me.
I smile at you.
You just ignore.

You confuse me so.
We were so close.
I gave you all of me.
My heart and more.

But now I am a memory.
One you want to erase.
Till all there is just nothingness.
Just an invisible girl.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:07 PM

Unrequited

You leave me breathless with only a smile.
My skin tingles as your eyes find mine.
The slightest whisper and I melt.
What is this feeling inside?

My heart aches when I’m not with you.
I long for you to hold me once again.
Why must we part with words unspoken.
Could it be I’m alone?

Now I see you smiling once again.
A smile not for me.
A smile of love and devotion.
That pains my unrequited heart.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:07 PM

Nothing

You stare at me with cold eyes.
A blank look upon your face.
Hints of laughter in the air.
Im just a disgrace.

You talk down to me.
I just turn red in embarrassement.
You turn away.
I look down in shame.

Everyday its all the same.
Why am I such a failure?
No matter how hard I try.
Im nothing in your eyes.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:10 PM

Words Unspoken

You are in my thoughts.
A constant reminder.
Always there with a smile.
To comfort and soothe.

My heart beats full.
With hope and wonder.
Wanting to hear,
How you truly feel.

If only my thoughts could speak.
And yours reply.
Then there would be no need,
To say these words unspoken.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:12 PM

Escape

You’re eyes look at me full of lust.
You’re lips become twisted.
You’re exposed to me with pride and glory,
As you laugh at my reaction.

My body begins to shake and tremble.
My skin starts to crawl with disgust.
My legs begin to give way,
As I avert my eyes from fright.

You approach me with words of filth.
I back away in rebuke.
You reach for me and try to grab.
But I turn and run away never to come back.

Years later you still haunt my thoughts.
I can still feel the fire on my skin.
The images still disturb me.
Will I ever escape these memories?

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:13 PM

Reality

A tear rolls down my cheek.
It drips upon a cloud.
I lay there, staring.
Thoughts buzzing with no sound.

It hurts to think.
Yet my mind never sleeps.
It hurts to smile.
But its more painful to cry.

Why is it my dreamland is so somber.
It used to be my only escape.
But dark clouds loam.
No sunshine to be found.

Reality has taken over now.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:15 PM

Alone

No sound to be heard.
Stillness surrounds me.
Darkness creeps near.
Its coming for me.

I call out.
No one responds.
The light begins to dim.
I shiver from the emptiness.

Alone again.
Nothing has changed.
Alone is the only thing,
That stays the same

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:16 PM

Numb

The overwhelming sadness takes over.
The words of death consume the mind.
Memories fly in front of my eyes.
All in the past is where we reside.

Harder I sob for you, screaming in agony.
Guilt and anger keep the sadness company.
My face is drenched in salty tears.
I begin to rock, as I think back over the years.

My voice is gone now, words unspoken.
My head is throbbing with every beat of my heart.
Soon I feel what I truly seek, the numbness seeping in.
Into my heart, mind, and soul, where I remain alone.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:17 PM

Death

Pale as the snow.
Coldness spreads.
No breath, nor heart beat.
An overwhelming silence.

No more thoughts.
Worries are absent.
The voices finally cease.
A peaceful rest.

Loved ones live on.
Memories as a constant companion.
Nothing can fill the emptiness.
Grief is the only guidance.

Death is what we all become.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:18 PM

The Rose

The dead of winter takes the life of spring.
No more flowers blooming beneath the sun.
The earth frozen underneath the pale snow.
Yet a single rose stands alone.

A blizzard forms showing winter’s fury.
Cold winds blow as more snow falls.
Ice forms on the single rose.
Alas it still stands tall.

The rose remains as if untouched.
Never showing signs of wilting.
As new as its first day of life.
The everlasting rose.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:20 PM

A Plea For Help

Chest feels heavy.
Lungs give way to the pressure.
Throat closes off.
Breathing ceases to exist.
The result of suffocation.

Nothingness cultivates in the pit of a stomach.
Sitting there like a rock.
Churning and turning the nausea grows.
Feeling sick with every touch.
The result of emptiness.

Head pounding with every heart beat.
Pressure building as noise rises to deafening tones.
Dizziness amounts from lights all around.
The room begins to spin on its own.
The result of bewilderment.

The soul is now lost.
The heart feels nothing.
No more breathing, no more thinking.
Nothing exists on the outside.
No one is left on the inside.

The result of complete unhappiness.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:21 PM

Shadows

Lost in the shadows.
Dark as night.
Chills and shivers.
Numb deep inside.

Haunting images.
Creations of the mind.
Looming closer.
Constraining ones cries.

Deep in the shadows.
One soul remains.
The soul of a child.
Slowly dieing within.

Shadows suffocate the child.
Consuming the mind.
The child gives up.
Disappearing into the cold night.

All laughter is gone.
Not a single tear is shed.
Thanks to the shadows,
Inside ones head.

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:23 PM

A Chapter Closed

Lights become brighter.
The tunnel nears an end.
The path finally unwinds.
Another chapter closed.

What is left now.
The next step so unclear.
Books have been read.
Tests passed.

Still an emptiness.
Moving on from friends to the unknown.
Completely left all alone.
What does following the right path bring?

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#22
Old 07-26-2007, 08:24 PM

Hidden Lies

Friends forever.
Two simple words.
So much meaning.
But is it an illusion?

Unbreakable bond.
An invisible string.
It carries such power.
Is there such a thing?

Complete understanding.
Comprehending every whim.
Trust and faith.
Is it all a myth?

Fairytales and make belief.
All stories with happy endings.
Faces constantly smiling.
But is this truly reality?

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#23
Old 07-26-2007, 08:25 PM

Selfish Girl

Selfish girl without a care.
Given all a person could bare.
Taking greedily without a word.
Blindly killing hearts and souls.

Selfish girl without any morals.
Bounce from bed to bed.
Destroying images and beliefs.
Until the last heart can no longer beat.

Selfish girl all alone.
Wonders where all her friends have gone.
She looks upon the earthen ground.
Bleeding corpses all around.

Selfish girl full of tears.
Yelling up to heavens clouds.
Anger and full of rage she questions.
How could you leave me all alone!

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Old 07-26-2007, 08:27 PM

Onesided Friendship

Once friends now nothing.
One side fighting.
The other not caring.
Tears falling all around.

How long can the one fight.
How long can the other ignore.
Who will push the other into submission.
Who will end the one sided war.

After months of being uncared for.
The fighter walks away.
Still looks back hoping.
But the other is far away.

Uncaring friend.
I tried to the very end.
Though our friendship was one sided.
That one side cared as if it were whole.

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#25
Old 07-26-2007, 08:28 PM

Heartbroken

Secret crushes and hidden love.
Never to be announced.
Feelings held deep inside.
Slowly breaking the heart.

Always your shoulder.
Letting tears fall.
Listening ever so intently.
To the love you want so badly.

Though I’m here.
It seems invisible to your eyes.
My heart aches.
Wanting to be by your side.

Impossibilities stemming from reality.
We are never meant to be.
The final arrow has been shot.
Heart shattering completely.

 


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