Roka
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02-02-2011, 03:40 AM
You have a lot of green there, even in your dream avatar. Hopefully you plan to break it up with white or another color.
1 / 10 for your avatar now, and 4 / 10 for your dream avatar.
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02-02-2011, 04:52 AM
your avitar reminds me of an easter avitar i like te pop of the green again the yellow orange and white well thats what pops to me then the lak pops next XD all in all i give your over all avitar a 6/10
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Wings of Writing
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02-02-2011, 04:53 AM
You avatar is very cutesty but i wish you had the black balance a little bit better my eyes were immediately drawn to the raven wings that i had to look for the rest of the black. 8/10 ack tooo slow
@randomness: your layering is awesome but i'm not entirely sure you really have a theme...and i don't really understand the wings at all. unless you are a fairy godmother? the wand would lend to that but i don't know it could be executed better so 7/10
Last edited by Wings of Writing; 02-02-2011 at 04:55 AM..
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QueenDarkSide
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02-02-2011, 04:56 AM
I love the theme you're going for. :D
The horns I think are a perfect addition to the avi.
9/10
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chronic_heartbreak14
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02-02-2011, 05:57 AM
owo thats a lot of lime green. i think you should get starkly different colors of green if you want a lot of green; so as to cause some diversity. right now its pretty barren and not very matchy, with no theme... so i'm going to give you a 3/10 :\
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Linnea
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02-02-2011, 07:52 AM
ok so i like the hair change... much better in my opinion
still love the colors and the layering... but is there anyways to get some blue in the waist section? the gloves are in the general area, but it just seems like there needs to be a little break in there somewhere.... maybe get a blue belt and some short white gloves... i bet that'd balance it out a little 9.5/10
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Murasaki Fujiwara
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02-02-2011, 10:10 AM
I LOVE the coloring and the layers. It's very complex and still very eye appealing.
While I also really like the lotus blossom hair pieces', I think it looks a little too much like a 'big white blob' on the side of your head. I'd almost see if I could find something a little smaller that goes with the layering, too.
Other than that, 9/10!
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QueenDarkSide
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02-02-2011, 04:48 PM
I feel like you're missing some red somewhere.
Red and white always reminds me of home. <3 Yay, Canada!
8.5/10
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Taliesin
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02-02-2011, 04:52 PM
I'll rate your dream avatar considering you're kinda naked right now XD
The hair could do with a lighter colour to make it look not as flat, and using more white or gold would bring out the colours a lot more. Perhaps change the stockings to white ones and have some anklets of some sort.
7/10
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Kiako
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02-02-2011, 07:03 PM
Taliesin, I believe your up to be rated.
A very bondage-esque avi. Its plain, and simple, but for the theme, it works well together. Its not over done, but there really isn't much else to say about it. I can name every item that you are using, and while that make be because I have been around to know most of the items, it also means you'r not using a huge range of items.
Then again, I don't have anything really negative to say, so I think this time around, I am just going to give you a simple rating of 6/10. Sorry deary :gonk:
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Roxxxy
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02-02-2011, 09:26 PM
Kiako: I really enjoy the way that you have incorporated skin into the silver-grey colors in the avi. You look ready for a bloody v-day! I feel like maybe she should be holding something though? 8/10.
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QueenDarkSide
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02-02-2011, 09:29 PM
Looking fantastic as usual, Roxxxy.
<3
I adore the color pattern and how bright everything stands out.
10/10
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Roka
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02-02-2011, 10:57 PM
Ah, you again! :P
I think that you should go for more of a gradient than trying to spread the red and black, just to go after the scarf thing.
If not, I think that you should change the hair to just red and take out the black highlights, and add more red to the bottom of your dream avi. The blood isn't really fitting in for me, nor are the black bunny ears (or the staff for that matter). Again, a third color would really help your case here, because red and black is awfully generic unless it has a little twist.
Your avatar now: 1 / 10
Your dream avatar: 4 / 10
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Roxxxy
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02-02-2011, 11:18 PM
Honestly, I kind of hate it :XD The colors just don't work together, and there is too much cluttered randomness on the head =/ 5/10, sorry dear.
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02-02-2011, 11:43 PM
your avitar reminds me of a fire eater at a circus and i like it very much i give you a 10/10
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Roka
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02-03-2011, 12:01 AM
Maybe tweak the hair just a touch darker? Add some gold to the top, and some white around your neck ( use a gumball choker? ). You can definately take out the wand, too. 7 / 10
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Taliesin
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02-03-2011, 12:17 AM
Hmm... the theme is cute and simple, and the colours are really eyecatching, however I think you need more pink in there to balance things out because right now the yellow overwhelms everything. Also I think wearing two 'hats' looks a little too cluttered, and if I had to pick between the two I think the Voodoo hat works better than the bow and bandana.
6/10
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Wings of Writing
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02-03-2011, 02:57 AM
While bondage avatars are always interesting this is just really simplistic and there really is no color variation except for the really randomly color hair and the red scratches. 4/10
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bloodstainedwings
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02-03-2011, 03:11 AM
i love the green eyes. they pop so much its great. i know im supposed to say that they dont match, but screw it, i like how much they pop. i also like the combination of the overlord items with the new items. they look great together. i would just like to see more layering. a brighter red headband maybe? anklets? slippers, or more shoe layering... that kinda stuff. you could also add the bloomers to your skirt layering to give it a little pop down there too. i find that the more common or simple colour combos need more layering to compensate, and the skirt is doing a lovely job, but it cant do it alone. i think that the shoe layering suggestion i made would be the greatest improvement and would really help it along.
this is probably the only time im not going to suggest another colour. if you added another colour, it would take away from the pop of green your eyes are giving it and that would be a shame. so just more layering on the feet and your good as gold.
8/10
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02-03-2011, 03:13 AM
i like the demonic looc on your avitar but i dont really care for te green eyes other than that its great so all in all i give you a 9/10
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chronic_heartbreak14
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02-03-2011, 03:30 AM
a mocha diva ;) yes i would, her palette is very pleasing to my eyes, as well as those heels and the bow
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QueenDarkSide
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02-03-2011, 04:14 AM
I love the colors you've put together, but I'm not really too sure about the hairstyle.
Something about it throws me off.
The color balance, I find to be amazing, they all compliment eachother very well.
I also enjoy the layering you have.
Just the hair throws me off.
9.5/10
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02-03-2011, 04:18 AM
well since your current is nearly naked i give it a 1/10 ut your dream avi i give a 8/10 i don't really care for the bunny ears i think i crown would be better (black on) but other than that its pretty good ^^
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star77
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02-03-2011, 04:23 PM
10/10 You've done a great job at balancing the colors and i love that its not cluttered.
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Hresvelgr
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02-03-2011, 05:42 PM
I would go with a lighter shade of pink on the socks. The pink blends into the background on the left foot. Making it look very uncomfortable xD I also think you need to either pick a gold in the background, or add more of the gold from the arch onto your avi.
6/10
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