I am a singer/songwriter and I write a lot of songs... When you begin writing you have to start with the hook... The hook is the catchy part of every song that people remember the most and it is usually part of the chorus...

Most of my songs are kind of depressing or on very deep topics but not all are and I can usually write a song about anything I can imagine...

I've had a hook written for about a year though, it is my favourite for some odd reason, but I have not written a song with it yet... I'm working on it, trying, believe me I am... But I haven't had any success...

So to get to the point, if I were to write a song the hook I would use is...
"I'm an angel, I am flying, hold me up with strings and hide them.
I'm not up, I am down, find my wings upon the ground."

I sometimes write songs myself, usually when under extreme stress/pressure or am someone disturbed/upset by my family. So when I started writing at the beginning of this school year, I was like, "Oh crap... =w="

Mine are usually pretty depressing or represent a topic that depresses me >.>";;
I sometimes write a lot of "hooks" but never put them into song XD...

I think the hooks to my most recent song were:
"I can never go back to the life I used to live. I can only hope to quicken the speed of the end. In our cold, monochrome world, illusions block my sight."
"When everything comes crashing down and sends you screaming underground, all you do is lose your mind as you completely resign."
"It's what I want to say! You can't take hold of me. What I want to be. Just have some faith in me."
They're not that good, but seemed to be the best parts of the songs xD.
I don't particularly have an talent for songwriting so... meh >w<

Originally Posted by ChiNoMizuumi

I sometimes write songs myself, usually when under extreme stress/pressure or am someone disturbed/upset by my family. So when I started writing at the beginning of this school year, I was like, "Oh crap... =w="

Mine are usually pretty depressing or represent a topic that depresses me >.>";;
I sometimes write a lot of "hooks" but never put them into song XD...

I think the hooks to my most recent song were:
"I can never go back to the life I used to live. I can only hope to quicken the speed of the end. In our cold, monochrome world, illusions block my sight."
"When everything comes crashing down and sends you screaming underground, all you do is lose your mind as you completely resign."
"It's what I want to say! You can't take hold of me. What I want to be. Just have some faith in me."
They're not that good, but seemed to be the best parts of the songs xD.
I don't particularly have an talent for songwriting so... meh >w<

I think that was pretty good actually :)
I like the imagery and think you could take them farther...
I'd love to read some of your songs if you'd like go show them to me... <3

I wrote a song/poem, I wrote it in a homeless shelter. I'll give you a little background (again...my browser lost it all by accident).

After facing the fact that I couldn't work due to severe mental illness, I found myself with no medication, no food, and no money at all. I was sleeping on James's couch, and applied to social assistance. I was denied because I wasn't on the street or in a shelter. James being diabetic, and the fact we were out of food, I went down to the welfare office. There were 3 people (who weren't white) in front of me and they all walked out with cheques for over $1000 (please don't call me racist, I've noticed here that white people are oppressed). The people at the desk refused me and made me wait for a cover worker. She yelled at me and treated me badly.

Still without medication, food or money; James was getting sick because there wasn't any food in the house, and I was getting sick because I hadn't eaten or had medication yet. I had to go to a shelter (and I've heard so many horror stories about shelters), it was a huge blow to my pride, but I did it. They helped me onto welfare, but it still was a struggle. I wrote this poem when I was extremely depressed:

Pawns to the System

How can you let your people starve?
You bind us in red tape till we die
Red tape, blue ink, and bitches at the office
You look at us, as a pawn in your game
Nationwide, all the time, fuck the little guys

You give yourselves raises, bonuses too
Looking down at us and pushing us through the cracks
We never fall through, we’re pushed
Pushing us night and day
We’re pawns to the system

Babies cry, babies dye, and you don’t even blink
People cheat you, you turn a blind eye
Deaths don’t shake your house of cards
You pull the red tape tighter, another dollar for you
No place to stay, can’t work at all
Don’t tell me to get a job, you want to keep me on the sidelines

You give yourselves raises, bonuses too
Looking down at us and pushing us through the cracks
We never fall through, we’re pushed
Pushing us night and day
We’re pawns to the system

Paper weighs us down, like mountains on our back
You sign a cheque, who cares if we can’t eat?
Power hungry assholes, deaf ears to our cries
We cry for justice, you corrupted us, nothing is real
Smoke and mirrors, shattering them for your pleasure

I used to write music but haven't since one of my hands is messed up. I can get the lyrics down but not the music part since I can't play anything with one hand. Normally my stuff is about whatever is bothering me at the moment. I've written lyrics about hate, love, acceptance, and a lot about one of my exes. Obviously, she bugged me a lot. XD I normally have to write something over again at least four times before I like it.

Kitsune Allisonn: I'm going to move this on over to the Music forum, as it seems more apropos there, and hopefully it'll help spark more life in that forum. :yes:

"everything happens to those we see, when nothing happens beyond my dreams.
Save my soul tonight my sweet love, there is more neverending streams."

@Kitsune : Haaa.... I'll post one on my blog on Mene... the monochrome world one xD....
I'm not that good, really, don't get my hopes up xDD
I'd love to see one of yours though o.o
Like a poem/song trade! :eager:

You are all very good I think...!

@Hamster -- I really liked yours, very straightforward 0w0

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/blogs/...ng-thingy.html
^the song, for those who wish to see xD. I don't feel like copying and pasting....

<3 I love how many people love music and want to write...

Considering everything I write are instrumentals until someone adds lyrics, my hook would be a riff that everyone will whistle too.

You made a very good point ZoSo, the music is a big part as well.

Oh. I've tried songwriting... Can't do it if I'm thinking about it! :sarcasm:
I'm great at poetry, it flows.. but if I am being told to write a song, right then and there, I can't really do it.. XD
It ends up being a mess~! However, I do randomly sing songs, and soo I guess a hook of a song I've randomly sung and made up is...

A thousand miles above the ground, I keep trying to find my way back down.
I can't seem to think straight, there's a fog in my head, and I'm wondering..
Where are you now?

That's my "hook", I guess. x) Wow, you can tell where I get my inspiration from! :lol:
Anywho, yeah I'm not very good at songwriting, or well... writing instrumentals!
:P I can barely play a few intros on guitar x) Oh well, maybe I'll get better?

Well, I'm a romantic, so it would have to be sweet. Not sickly mushy, but just enough to play on the heartstrings :)

Um, obvious plug since someone started posting work.

Anywho, when I actually write one outside of a concept (of which not all tracks necessarily need a hook IMO, though it's still needed)... my hooks tend to be varied depending on what it's about. I like to attempt all subjects at least.

Originally Posted by Kitsune Allisonn

You made a very good point ZoSo, the music is a big part as well.

Music is the most important part of every song. Then personally, I put lyrics before vocals.

Mine would probably along the lines of:

If you're in the need of a vacation,
Take a look into my imagination;
It's a place so fun and bright,
It would fill your hearts with pure delight.
It's neat, a treat of sweets-- it's how I flee
From the world.

LOLL, I really don't know~

I like that :)

Thanks~ I don't like writing (yet I roleplay all the time-- I know that makes not sense) XDD