Give me the Sky

as a dress

and the Stars

for my hair.

Give me the Moon as a pearl

and it's shimmering ocean reflection

as necklaces.

​

Tell me my voice is like a songbird.

That my skin is

as perfect as a single rose petal.

Whisper to me

that my eyes shine like the Sun

my long hair runs like silk

through your fingers

​

Show me the wonders

that make your life magic

Teach me your light

How do you manage?

Why do I only see darkness

Where you tell me there is light?

​

Give me the Earth

and I shall create our world.

Give me a pen and ink

and I shall write you

poetry.

Give me your thoughts

and I shall listen with care.

Honour me with love

and I shall give you my best smile.

​

For all you will Give me

I ask for you not to be greedy.

There is not much of me

you can

Take.

For all that

I was

has been long since

stripped away

from me.

I will Give

all that remains

to you.

​

if You can only Give

one thing to me I do not

wish for the moon

or stars

all I ask

is that you give

this ruined, dark soul

a Chance at light.

(What do you think? I'm quite proud of it :D It was inspired by this song: YouTube - ‪Billy Talent - Tears into wine with Lyrics‬‏ Not to sound like an attention whore, but comment please :))

It sounds lovely! It's tough to be inspired by a song without completely ripping it off, so it seems like you've found a great balance with this. :)

But since it's a poem, I've just moved it into our Poetry subforum for you.

(oh sorry, totally didn't see that XD)
Here's my latest poem, once again inspired by a song (or in this case a cover of a song) Hear it here

"Last"

​

You're so beautiful when you sleep

​It's impossible to think

that this could be the last time

I'll ever see you.

We've always been together

since the beginning

of our lives.

If it's impossible for me,

what is it like for you?

To imagine

that your time is almost up,

I never really knew,

Are you religious?

Do you believe in Heaven?

You're not going to Hell

Trust me dear, I know

Better then you do I think.

You always thought you were

evil

You never saw

How perfect you were-

I mean are.

You're not gone yet.

You're not dead yet baby.​

There's still a chance.​

I know

you hate when I say this

but why did it have to be you?

Of all the terrible people in the world...

No I can't say that

....

Oh, you're awake

I know, I know

"There are no bad people

just bad desicions"

It's just...

It's not fair you know?

Of course you know.

You know better then anyone.

But your dumb enough

to think you deserve it.

Oh sorry

I didn't mean that....​

...

I know dear

You're the Perfect devil

and I'm the Sinful Angel.

We've played this game before.

Surely you know it's not real?

....

Well I didn't mean to demean you

...

I'm sorry

I'm just frustrated

with you being like that

You're perfect

and I wish

you could see that

...

No!

I'm not just saying that.

It's true.

You refuse to see

your own beauty

it's always been that way

...

No- I don't mean-

...

Okay!

Okay...

I'll stop "attacking" you

but you know I"m right

which is why your behaving like this

...

......

............

.....................

baby?