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Old 08-11-2009, 12:15 AM



This thread here will be used to post various short stories that I have written.
To be honest, they may not be stories you will like.
They are not to be stolen from me.
Other than that, I would love constructive criticism, or comments.
What you do is a choice that can only be made by you.

Edit:
Jesus cat-in-the hat Christ!
I need to update this soon...
Sorry, Mene...I've fallen on tough times.
Well, times tougher than they usually are.
And...school starts again...so uhm...anyone who reads...or likes these stories...
Sorry...busy as hell.

Double Edit!
Gaaah, reading over these stories...they sound like shit!
I apologize for the language...but I am my own worst critic.
So, I'm taking them down for maintenance.
They should be back up again soon...


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Old 08-11-2009, 01:00 AM



There was a story here. It's gone now.
{Story under maintenance.}


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Old 08-12-2009, 02:23 PM

Very realistic but sad. I really like your writing style. You shoulkd write more. I'll be waiting for the new story ^^

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Old 08-12-2009, 02:35 PM

Thanks, Meerclar.
The new story may take longer than I thought...I'm still half asleep and I can't pull my ideas together...but...there will be a new story soon!
Or, so I hope!
:sarcasm:

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Old 08-12-2009, 07:33 PM

There was a story here. It's gone now.
{Story under maintenance.}

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Old 08-14-2009, 03:36 AM

Indeed they are sad, but you do have a very good writing style. That last one was very Higurashi, in my oppionion. Sorta. *W* A little more brutal than Higurashi actually, but still very good. It's funny, when you told me about this last story, we were talking about your mom... :O

Eee so now I am suscribed! I can't wait to read more, Ume-chan. :hug:

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Old 08-14-2009, 01:43 PM

Thanks Reina-chan.
...here's the really funny thing...
I wrote this story after a fight with Okaasan.
Yep, mommy is inspiration for a lot of things.

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