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Old 09-20-2007, 10:24 AM

Tis was written 2 years ago for an contest on gaia, it describes the transformation of one man into a werewolf. I really enjoyed writing it and I think it's one of my better works.

5 minutes of hell


minute one
It begins without warning though I feel the urge to wander.
Eyebrows grow and thicken, teeth and nails grow longer


Minute two
Then the hair starts to grow on my ears hands and face
I burn and I freeze while my heart starts to race

Minute three
I'm dizzy and panting unsure where to turn
Filled with power and energy to burn
Each ear twitch brings sharper sounds each breathe stronger smells
My body grows harder with changes I can't quell
An animals pelt emerges and my body longs to fight
As my eye shift to those of a beast of the night

Minute four
Then there is pain of which I cannot tell
So much as to say I feel like I'm in hell
Inside my body, bones and muscle are rearranged
Spine starts to lengthen and a furless tail I can claim
My hands now have pads my jaw has grown long
My feet form into paws and the change move along


Minute five
My tail becomes furred , my bones lock in place
Their shifting has left me with an obvious canine face
My last coat of fur a coarse greyish white covers my skin
Completing the change masking the man within.

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Old 09-21-2007, 07:21 AM

Lady please do make multiple poetry threads. It is preferred that you post all your poetry in one thread.

As for the poem, I really like it. It's quite interesting how you described the transformation. ^^ excellent job!

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Old 09-23-2007, 04:24 AM

OMG its awesome! I really like it, cause you managed to explain the transformation in such way ^^, keep up the good work! :D

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Old 09-23-2007, 09:53 AM

Thanks to both of you. I really tried hard to get the imagery across.

 


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