Random poem I had to write for school because we'd just finished "The Giver" (alright book, horrible ending) and it had to be on a color. I don't think it's any good, but some of my friends do. What about you?

Also discuss: Works of your own, songs I suppose (they are literature, just in lyrical form, lol), how awesome it is to be eating pancakes for dinner (which I am tonight).

Click Ze Fixed Link

Your link takes me to a http.com page. Perhaps you should just post your poem if you want feedback/whatnot. :3

Originally Posted by melody xyelle

Your link takes me to a http.com page. Perhaps you should just post your poem if you want feedback/whatnot. :3

Fixed it, thank you. Apparently Menewsha feels the need to put in "http://" without telling me, besides having it in the code, which I figured would just be correct, as I had pasted the proper URL.