The first one makes little sense, and I think rewording some of it would help.
tripped me up some, the first one could probably use some revising and maybe some punctuation to just slow it down a little.
On the second one the last three or so lines should be broken up a little more to continue that strong rhythm to the finish. It kind of ends a on a week note because of that disconnect.
On the third you started out without a rhyming pattern and then suddenly jumped into one partway through which is strange.
Again in the last one it ends on a week note for the same reason as before.
As far as content goes, it was all pretty good. Nice vocabulary and strong verbs. :3