Welcome to my poetry thread!
Im kind of new here , so bare with me if I don't do this right. Ive read the rules but feel free to correct me if I miss anything.
Im going to use this thread to post my poetry as I see fit, and any and all critique are more than welcome.
Ill start with the poem I named the thread after.
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Oh baby, Your a glutton for punishment.
Just hold you down and watch you squirm till you realize it.
Oh baby, Your a glutton for punishment.
From love letter to death note.
With each word your deluded.
Like smoke in your chest, she'll make you choke.
Trapped; your hearts atmosphere polluted.
I don't mean to sound hostile but its all a lie.
Make up your damn mind.
I find myself wishing all you people would die.
Innocent girl, Thoughts so unkind.
Oh baby, Your a glutton for punishment.
I could do these things to you; hurt you like you want me to.
This enamoredness is ridiculous.
Understand I just cant keep on watching this.
Oh baby, Your a glutton for punishment.
For punishment.
Allow me to repair you.
Without her who would despair you?
Not I, darling, Not I.