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Old 08-05-2009, 04:03 AM

I like to think of poems as songs the heart sings, and here is where I will post all of my poems, enjoy! Be sure to let me know what you think.

Right now there's only one, but don't worry, this one's completely fiction. They wont always be this sad either. Also, I've been experimenting with this repetitive pattern. If you would like to comment on that rather than the content I'd love to hear that as well.

It would be from the heart.
If I told you something I never told anyone before, it would be dull and ordinary.
If I told you something you had never heard before, it wouldn't be true.
If I told you part of me died a little that night, it would be from the heart.

The heart that's been ripped apart, and is only barley hanging on. It was tossed about and cut into pieces...
I did my best to stitch it up, but it could never be fully whole again

If I told you that I found someone that makes me smile, you'd see that it was true.
If I told you that I found someone who takes away the pain, you'd see it's only temporary.
If I told you that I found someone who deserves better than me, you'd see it was from the heart.

He takes my hand, and I fly for a while; I'm in love, and I forget a little.
Then it all comes crashing down,when the memories flash before my eyes
The tears fall, because my tattered heart doesn't understand.

But it remembers...

How it got ripped apart, and could barely hang on.
When it was tossed about, and cut into pieces.
When I did all I could to put it back together, and it wants to be fully whole again
but it doesn't quite know how.

Last edited by kodoku; 08-05-2009 at 04:29 AM..

 



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