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#26
Old 03-31-2013, 03:58 PM

Not sure... that's a good point...

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#27
Old 03-31-2013, 04:16 PM

Yet to return, the shadowed one.
Who quests for the Twilight Dragon
Rumbles the Dark Hearth,
And Helba, Queen of the Dark,
has raised finally her army.
Apeiron, King of Light beckons.
At the base of the rainbow do they meet
Against the abominable Wave,
together they fight.
Alba's lake boils.
Light's great tree doth fall.
Power- now all to droplets turned
in the temple of Arche Koeln.
Returns to nothing,
this world of shadowless ones.
Never to return, the shadowed one,
Who quests for the Twilight Dragon.



...Oh wait wrong poem....
I got a Haiku for you..
The Silent One Ran
to get revenge on him fast
Go Ninja Bunny!

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#28
Old 03-31-2013, 05:03 PM

This is a haiku
I wrote it all by myself
And this is the end

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#29
Old 03-31-2013, 05:20 PM

I give you life; you make it move
An endless dance of nature
I am the sun; you are the moon
and through seasons love endures

Now we start the cycle new
a rhythm never changing
a fawn's cry, a baby's coo
holds the essence of our spring.

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#30
Old 03-31-2013, 07:39 PM


jelly beans don't make you toot
they are small and oh so cute
yummie jelly beans are my soul pursuit
i look for them first, in my Easter loot


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#31
Old 03-31-2013, 07:40 PM

Haha that is an adorable and funny poem hummy!

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#32
Old 03-31-2013, 07:52 PM



i wanted to try, Amber entered RAK's talent contest.

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#33
Old 03-31-2013, 07:53 PM

That is cute hummy ^_^ Thanks for the poems guys. They are really good.

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#34
Old 03-31-2013, 07:58 PM


sorry i couldn't think of anything else

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Old 03-31-2013, 08:02 PM

I liked hummys the best so far. It was very fitting for the theme and made me smile... never seen the word "toot" in a poem before

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Old 03-31-2013, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by The Wandering Poet View Post
I liked hummys the best so far. It was very fitting for the theme and made me smile... never seen the word "toot" in a poem before

*hugs*
thank you, Poet
i almost didn't post it
i couldn't get it to flow like y'all do

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#37
Old 03-31-2013, 08:04 PM

Yeah so far hummys is the best -nods nods-

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#38
Old 03-31-2013, 08:05 PM


pffft

toot

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#39
Old 03-31-2013, 08:20 PM

I think it looks good hummy. Flows alright :)
If I refused to post anything that didn't flow perfectly I'd never post a poem

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#40
Old 03-31-2013, 08:24 PM

Poems dont even have to rhyme. They can be about anything you want. I love poems because there are so many options for how to make them.

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#41
Old 03-31-2013, 08:36 PM

Nope I like rhyming but I have a few finished ones that don't.

My favorite rhyme I wrote was for if I ever have a child... I'd love to teach it to other parents someday ^^

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#42
Old 03-31-2013, 08:42 PM

I'm lacking inspiration.

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#43
Old 03-31-2013, 09:23 PM


i lack talent

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#44
Old 03-31-2013, 10:05 PM

Psh... I will one day lecture you so much on that...

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#45
Old 03-31-2013, 10:06 PM


welcome back, how was your ride?

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#46
Old 03-31-2013, 10:37 PM

Very butt achy of a ride but oh so worth it

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#47
Old 03-31-2013, 10:38 PM


aw yeah that sucks

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#48
Old 03-31-2013, 10:43 PM

Worth it though! :3 so relaxing

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#49
Old 03-31-2013, 10:44 PM


that's good

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#50
Old 04-01-2013, 01:30 PM


any one else want to enter Amber's Easter contest?

 


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