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Old 02-12-2014, 03:58 AM

~MY OREO LOVE~


Love is like an oreo two plain cookies from the start,

But when true feelings come between the two join at the heart,

Sometimes relationships crumble others milked for all there worth,

Some are twisted violently apart and others stay a whole,

Just remember one thing though no matter how your cookie relationship goes if needed theres always spares in the bag you know

~Gizmo~

---------- Post added 02-11-2014 at 10:09 PM ----------

Just a little poem wrote by me , i know im not very good but i just like to share my works

Feel free to leave me comments :)

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Old 02-14-2014, 11:14 AM

…That was really incredible, really smart too and it flows perfectly. :)

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Old 02-14-2014, 11:33 AM

That was a darn good analogy! Who knew an oreo could be so deep
Well done!

 


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