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#26
Old 04-03-2008, 04:44 AM

I see fireflies. :o

My turn! >w<

Softly blowing,
Never leaving,
My heart has longed for you.

You tease me with those invisible hands,
You hold me when I can't hold myself up,
You push me away when your in pain.

I push on forward,
To be with you,
Even if you destroy me . . . ,
That would be okay.

I would be able to join you once again,
To see your face,
Forehead to forehead,
Skin to skin,
Embracing your touch,
And when I see your eyes. . .

I remember why everything is okay.

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#27
Old 04-05-2008, 03:57 AM

Actually it was the stars.

I think your's is... happiness?

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Sometimes looking like a lime
But depending on the time

A beacon of glowing light
Until it vanishes from sight

It is a ball in the sky
Up there it does fly
Till seasons make it die

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#28
Old 04-08-2008, 05:39 AM

Err... It's the sun! I think.


Sorry for the nubness of my poem.
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The nights are cold without you,
my fluffy little friend.
If I cannot hold you when I sleep,
the tossing and turning never ends.
You are so soft and cuddly,
you're much better than a boy.
I cannot live without you, friend,
you are my very favorite toy.


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#29
Old 04-13-2008, 04:26 PM

Well, I think that last one was very cute. I believe that it was describing ones love for a cherished child hood sleeping toy, such as a teddy bear.

So much better than a boy,
You'll never leave me.
Follow me around,
Like a shadow on the ground,
Always watching over me,
Hanging over like a cloud,
Darkness slowly covers me,
Wrapping like a shroud.
Gripping the corners of my mind,
Creeping up all the time,
Tearing me apart,
Depression seems so much better,
When you have a broken heart.

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#30
Old 05-04-2008, 05:35 PM

I see love because that is what i feel about love.

Ding, high and low
Depending on day
From square to round
With many sounds
All is found and lost
Within my cloth

The Wandering Poet
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#31
Old 05-10-2008, 09:24 AM

I think the last one is a clock? Though dunno what the cloth would be part of.

Here'smine:

Leaving a mark unlike any other
A footprint unlike all the rest
It's what the world seeks to find
Yet rarely is it ever seen
Like a blue moon it appears
But only if you sit and wait
For those who chase it
Will only scare it away

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#32
Old 05-14-2008, 03:11 AM

i dont know its somthing rare that isnt easily found and it can dissapear quickly when found.

its soft
quiet whispers
soothing
it sweeps me up then gently lay me down

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#33
Old 05-17-2008, 01:19 PM

Seem like it's about love or the love OF something.

I was bent but never broken
I was stretched but never torn
If I shatter I cannot mend
If a piece is lost I can not survive
I'm with all but used by some
I'm what all secretly desire
A simple thing am I
A part you need to survive
Yet without it you can live
But only a husk may remain
Until I am found again

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#34
Old 05-18-2008, 10:54 PM

I see trust in that poem
here is mine

when I push
you push back
when I feel
you feel back
when I love
you love back
all when I fly through our hair
and across the pond
each part of me
is part of you

The Wandering Poet
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#35
Old 05-20-2008, 09:29 PM

Sounds like it might be about a relationship :)

You can see me never touch me
I glow at sunset with many colors
I bring tidings of rain and shade
The wind guides me to my destiny
I fly with the birds in the sky
Yet unnoticed am I

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#36
Old 06-12-2008, 07:18 AM

I've noticed the clouds. Blown by the wind, lit up at dawn and dusk, bringing rain, and covering the sun to provide shade. Though one can feel a cloud... they're freezing.

Push along run along, you don't know the way but I do
Wipe a worry tear fresh clean breeze clean stride with mine
Side by side striding
Watch that and catch your step, I'll catch your step
If you miss your mark and fall.
Almost fall.
Someday you will not need me
Leave me
By the door
Run along now.

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#37
Old 09-06-2008, 10:15 PM

I saw parenting. One day we have to let them go.

Shine. they ask me,
where is the light?
it's in the mirror, you see,
the sun in the night.

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#38
Old 10-03-2008, 04:33 PM

I perceived the moon, since it does reflect the sun's light.

You show the truth
When none else will
For you cannot lie.

Only if there were some flaw
You would distort
Render a carnival figure.

But otherwise
You catch the light
Catch truth's image
And give it back.

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#39
Old 10-05-2008, 03:40 AM

I saw an angel, I don't know the real reason, but it's because Angels Can not lie, they shine too.

My Beloved,
Why Must You Be Gone
Why Must You Be Away
For I Love You
You Pledged to Me On that Beautiful Day
But Now You Went on a New Journey
And Left Me Widowed
With the Children I have Brought for You
With the Children We Loved Together
Darkness
Is What I See
Everytime I Look At Your Picture
On That Fateful Day

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#40
Old 10-12-2008, 04:19 PM

a wife and mother watching her love walk into battle.


Why do you forsake my lovely.
This love is sufficing, walking through my realm of reality.
Can’t you see the lock down of my soul.
Be it black or not.
Don’t I feel.
Don’t I hurt .

You can say this and that but I know you love me too.
It might kill me in the end but this is a love lock down.
The key’s around my neck.
I control what happens
There’s no escape from this.
You’re here.
Your all here.
I’ve never been more happy.
I don’t want to see you leave.

The love may be death but with out you all it’s life
And life is hard.
Stay here.
I’ll protect you from what may come.
I’ll protect you from what is staring you in the face.
The eye of the beast.
I shall show no fear, you’re my little baby’s
I’m not the best knight but
… I try so very hard.

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#41
Old 12-10-2008, 08:19 PM

It looks like... it's about ~Unrequited Love~?

Chained down, unable to fly,
Beat down, but unable to die.
You try to look through this lie,
I will hold you up when you cry.

The air around this torture chamber,
Sounds screams of suffering and fear.
The water dripping from the ceiling,
Makes you always come so near.

You fight the pain though you can't take it
You bite your lip cause you can't hide it
Your fist is clenched you want to make it
But things will be better if you just confide

CONFESS! All of your sins my friend
REGRESS! Into the world in your dreams
DESTRESS! Until we show you the end
Inquisitioning to hear your screams.

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#42
Old 12-19-2008, 01:03 AM

This is going to make me sound sadistic but, it made me think of a rape victim in the hospital.

Like a cloud she sits to stare
Out into her world seeing all that is there
Yet remaining purposefully blind
Not wishing to admit existence in a place so unkind
Forboding storms gather all around
And cruelly press her into the ground
Keeping her trapped among thunder and lightning until she cries
Wondering how much longer until her spirit dies
Thus she waits day by day
Although she is frightened she continues to pray
Hoping someday soon they will turn and she can leave at last
Slipping out of their torturous grasp
But she knows she will never be truly free
Of their hatred's memory

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#43
Old 01-05-2009, 10:03 AM

A silent whisper of the night drawing you in;
An evil motive has risen
He walks closer and closer
Toward you
(You back away)
He moves closer
(and)
He sees you
(your fear)
He takes you away
(your nightmare)
He tastes you
(your night terror)
He has crushed your soul
(your life)
Is now destroyed.

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#44
Old 01-05-2009, 11:06 PM

A Rabbid dog attack. Or a mugger.
And I think pysrien's is a mirror.

I look like a blade in the grass,
cutting my path as I hurry along.
Stealth is my motive always,
No one will notice me go through my day.
If you get close, I alarm.
My sound is unique from anyone else.
Keep coming near, I'll take stance;
I tend to paralyze those who approach.
I didn't ask for comp'ny.
You get too close and I'll make sure you leave,
If you survive my attack.
I swear to you, I prefer solitude.
All I want is to eat lunch.
You're not on my menu; don't bother me.
Anyway, why would I try?
You're just too big, I have much smaller game.
You with your extremities.
I don't need those things, they get in the way.
All I need is my big mouth.
My muscles take care of the rest for all things.
Oh, food comes hopping my way.
You're hind'ring my stealthiness by standing there.
You run along on your way.
I've got some lunch to devour over there.


I think I made it too obvious :oops:

Last edited by DeLish; 01-05-2009 at 11:07 PM.. Reason: spelling error

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#45
Old 01-06-2009, 01:13 AM

DeLish, you would be correct. And I'm guessing for yours a rattlesnake?

You are lover to many men
Mothers, wives, and sisters
Claim you've taken them away.

You are beautiful.
You are ruthless.

You are the largest pool of tears cried
The only one who rules you is the moon
As she pulls your tide.

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#46
Old 01-06-2009, 03:55 AM

I knew it was too easy.
The ocean? Sailors and fishermen love the sea, but it don't always love 'em back.

Gold in color
soft in shape
Long and short
prone to break
Grouped with brethren
heat is shared
but lost quickly
once consumed
Some are scorched
Some are limp
All have starch
and sodium



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#47
Old 01-06-2009, 05:29 PM

A silent whisper on winters day
A chill of the spine
An icy stare
A girl of the darkest black hair
With eyes full of despair
A small but strong frame is what is there.
She goes by the name "Michelle"
That is what she is called until her deathbed calls out to her
Come, come the time is now, the end is near.
Don't be afraid, death can't hurt you.
Only life can.

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#48
Old 01-07-2009, 07:23 AM

Uhm, is that from a scary movie?
And you didn't guess mine :(

A wonderful invention!
It keeps me all together!
It opens and closes, it stretches for me
It handles any weather!

What would I do without it?
My stuff can't move without it!
I'd wander around, and wonder where found
My treasures lost, gosh darnit!

It's Kryponite for men
Without it I would dread
My life would be in shambles, see
I give it much due cred.

I feed it every day
It holds those precious things
It's girl's best friend, more than diamonds
It's meant for belongings.

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#49
Old 01-07-2009, 09:56 PM

i predict a bra i got that idea from "ti holds the precious thing" "Its kriptonite for men"

it hold the things that i keep dear to me
the only place that i can be me

i choosed the colour i choosed the view
its no ones place but min

i know its short lol but youll figure it out

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#50
Old 01-11-2009, 12:25 AM

Your bedroom?
And, that's a nice guess. Not what I was going for, but I can see it, too. :D

He rises before me, and leaves just the same.
He's highly well-known, but cares not for fame.
His light warms all, but some hate that fact.
They say it's too much, avoid his contact.
But no one escapes him, he's just too big.
Every day he returns, performs the same gig.
Some folks want to touch him, he's oh so hot.
But no one gets close, not by a long shot.
We'll never forget him, though some see his death.
We'll die along with him, no more seeking breath.
He'll truly be missed, our biggest best star.
We'll try to move on, but we won't get far.
We say, "Live eternal! Don't die on us, dude!"
Of course, he won't listen, but not to be rude.
He'll die when he dies, and we'll have to deal.
With this star now gone, things will seem surreal.


Gosh! That took me forever to end!

 


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