well it's not that much art but still...

the anatomy it kind of off in this one :\


I still need to finish the colour the first one and then ink/colour the second



and I've been bored so I got on paint and started this

[I'd love it if someone could do a draw over on that because I can't seem to get that arm right...she's got a basket full of ice cream cones lol]

Some good art here! You should put them up on deviantart :D

Thank you ^-^
none of them are really ready for deviant art :\
...that and I get more feedback here than I would there...

Ohh :o Very pretty.
I love the first and the only thing that really sticks out is how some parts of the body aren't really proportioned right but that could simply be your style :) Your art is very fun!

I have no idea wtf happened when I drew that first one I usually attempt to make everything the right size heh

yay! *is fun* thank you

Cool ^^ I saw your first pic on solia I think ^^

thank you, yeah probably lol ... it's on Roliana as well

Yeah, you need to work a bit on your anatomy. These are extra cute, though. They remind me of the dolls I had as a child, with the stars in the eyes.

Here's a draw-over, since you asked. I would've done a redline but... your lines were already red. XD Maybe something like this?



Does that help at all? I think your original doesn't account for the fact that the bowl will conceal part of her arm, since it's sitting on top of it. Getting a photo reference or (ideally) a model would help you even more.

I am getting there lol thank you [I grew up with those dolls too]

THANK YOU! I couldn't figure out how to get the bowl thing in there right ... and now I kind of fell all like ... duh.

Ahh, it's so simple to say, "Keep practicing!" but doing it is so hard for me. ._. So I'm in the same boat as you, lol.

You're welcome! I'm glad I was able to help. That happens to me all the time-- sometimes the answer is so simple, but I just can't see it and need to ask someone else to help me. I think two thirds of it is just knowing that it needs fixing, and the rest is knowing how, which is often surprisingly easy. So you're in good shape anyway.

wow, I really like your style. and the basket fix gave me an 'oooh' moment too. I fail when it comes to holding objects. I normally end up holding the object (or one similar) myself and then taking a picture to see how it lies with the body. >.<

your good.im still trying to draw the clothes on my art.its pretty hard though it may seem easy but its pretty hard.also i am now on makin 1 comic but its hard because of the background and my faces don't look that good :( but i am trying and i will not fail to try :)

Your art is adorable! =]