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Old 08-22-2008, 01:58 AM

Just a little something that I drew for fun so tell me what you think about it k

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Old 08-22-2008, 05:21 AM

I think its pretty ^_^ you should colour it

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Old 08-22-2008, 03:41 PM

Thanks so much I'm working on getting coloring software at this moment, once I get it I'm sure I'll color it.

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Old 08-22-2008, 07:03 PM

Good anatomy, but I think the feet seem to big.

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Old 08-22-2008, 08:47 PM

Ah thanks Eserel, but I though that they were supposed to have big feet?

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Old 08-22-2008, 10:40 PM

It looks very good, but the cheek shouldn't go out so far. Also, it might be just me, but I think the lower leg is a little too thick.

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Old 08-22-2008, 11:57 PM

Wow, the body looks great! :D The lips look a bit awkward to me, and so do the wings. >_<;; They kinda look like they're just popping out on the side. Other than that, you did a great job, very beautiful. ^_^

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Old 08-23-2008, 09:05 PM

Dystopia I can see what you mean by the cheek, but I don't know about the leg
xxDARKSECRETSxx, thanks for the complement I can see what you mean by the wings, truth be told I was in debate about them so I stuck then on to see if I'd like them in the picture, I do and I forgot to touch it up before scanning it.

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Old 08-25-2008, 05:55 PM

It's really cute, good job on the pose and anatomy especially. Good luck on getting some good coloring software. ^^

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Old 08-28-2008, 08:15 PM

Thanks Sharpest Spoon, the software will be here Sunday so I'm really excited~

WIP
I'm really loving how she's coming along

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Old 08-30-2008, 07:01 PM

wow, your new WIP looks fabulous!

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Old 08-30-2008, 08:30 PM

Gee thanks Melody, your avatar looks wonderful by the way~
Would you believe that it started out as a guy ^^; that was before I
made a few minor altercations though~ Though the image isn't
up to date I plan on giving her a tube top with vine and flower accents
coming up from the left side. I've yet to decide on a color for the shirt itself
though~

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Old 02-26-2009, 06:07 AM

oooh, nice hair. It started out as a guy? lol XD
For some reason her pose seems really awkward. The way her head/neck connects to the rest of her body seems forced and stressful.

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Old 02-26-2009, 05:45 PM

It's a great concept (the new pic) but the bangs coming out are too far down the head, should be up a little higher

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Old 03-03-2009, 12:07 AM

@ Jesweet Its been so long I can't really tell you what kind of look I was going for. Looking at it now I guess I was going for a sort of stuned look just for kicks, but I can see what you mean. And yea it did start out as a guy, but when I finished the hair I though to myself...there's just no way this would pass as a guy...so I changed the gender at the last minute.

@ AngelicCat That would be a first. I'll be honest and say that I was attempting to redraw the face of another picture (from a book) and that is where the original artist placed the bangs on the male figure...it started out as a male..so maybe that's why they're off now...it never struck me as strange, but I have the updated image and I'll be sure to post it.

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Old 03-03-2009, 12:15 AM

I just realized it's been forever since you posted the art, but I'll leave this anyway. XD

I love the face, but shouldn't the eye be at the furthest in part of the head's outline instead of above it?

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Old 03-03-2009, 12:22 AM

@ Cami You'll have to tell me which image you're talking about and its totally fine. I love hearing what others have to say no matter how dated the image is so don't worry about it.

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Old 03-03-2009, 12:37 AM

The second one. The one on post ten, I think.

 


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