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#5151
Old 05-16-2009, 05:10 AM

Cherry - The weapons-item at Ryl's hip are the sheathed katana from the Jade Ronin contribution item.

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#5152
Old 05-16-2009, 05:12 AM

I love that item, the Jade Ronin. It's so prettyful. I want it, but right now I am focusing on my quest. Does anyone have suggestions, it's the avatar in my sig.

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#5153
Old 05-16-2009, 05:30 AM

AHH, sorry for not seeing your edit, Cherry! ;o;
But yeah, CK is right~ The swords are from the Jade Ronin. xDD;; <3<3

Anyhows, here are my current attempts again. xDD;;
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Both are for the "Green" challenge. =O

The first is some sort of tree spirit. xDD;;
The second is an abstract representation of the world. Green is land, blue is ocean, golds are the sun, and red is the lava underneath the earth's crust. xDD;;

Tell me what you think, guys? :3 <3<3


And flea, I really don't like that hat, personally, so I can't give you an unbiased critique with that hat on. ^^;; Lolz. 8DD;;

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#5154
Old 05-16-2009, 11:16 AM

right. so.

I have my current, for the green theme

and this thing I mac'd

it's supposed to be a sunset over the ocean (inspired by this, but not a direct representation) for the fossil fuel challenge

and this of course


aaaand this work in progress for the green challenge


so, um, advice?
xD

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#5155
Old 05-16-2009, 01:15 PM

Seiki- I love your avatar! I think you should replace the silver dragon gloves with the teal circus gloves though.

Ry- I like your avatars for what they are, but for the contest I think they're a bit "off topic". I mean, the challenge is to make a green avatar, but your have so many other colors that you can't really tell which one it's for, especially since the colors you're using are so bold/bright. I think you should use green and pick maybe two other colors (either black, white, gold, silver or a shade of brown would be best to not make them stand out) to use as accents, but you really need to make the green stand out.
The blue and the purple you used in your two samples draw too much attention to themselves instead of making the green stand out.

Slow- I like all those avatars for what they are, like Ry's, but I don't think they fit the challenge much.
The first one, I love the color scheme, but you focused too much on the colors and not the items for what they are. The only items that would even make me think of water is the sash, the rest of the items have nothing to do with what you're trying to represent. Try and find items that go with the theme.
I like the second one, though I think the thing that bothers me the most is the fact that there are so many different shades of blue/teal that it doesn't look like water anymore. The colors look good together, but in this situation they don't mix well enough for me to make it resemble water. What I would do is take out the royal blue and the teal (not the atlantis color, you should keep that) and work with the paler shades.
I don't really like your third one though, I think it's just a personal preference though. I don't like the white skin with those colors and it really resembles your previous entry for that challenge.

Though, I really like your current avatar! It makes me think of a forest warrior spirit or something xD If I had to choose out of the four avatars, I would go with the one you're wearing now.

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#5156
Old 05-16-2009, 01:34 PM

Thanks creps... I get what you mean about the colours (you're the first person to have put that into words so eloquently xD ). It was meant to be a deep sea wave and I had the idea that the cape and the big top skirt would be like flowing water but I guess
I didn't pull it off well enough xD

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#5157
Old 05-16-2009, 03:19 PM

I forgot about those! I'll have to go and buy them later. Thanks though!

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#5158
Old 05-16-2009, 03:35 PM

Hello! What's new everyone? Does anyone have any critique for my dream avatar? sorry that I am totally shifting the subject. I just don't know if I like the light blue in the avatar or not.

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#5159
Old 05-16-2009, 03:39 PM

Flea: Why don't you create a thread in the item advice, questions, and quick ratings forum for it?

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Old 05-16-2009, 03:40 PM

Oh yeah lol. Cami is my common sense, seriously. whenever I see you, you find a mistake I did :D thank you :hug:

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#5161
Old 05-16-2009, 04:28 PM

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Thanks creps... I get what you mean about the colours (you're the first person to have put that into words so eloquently xD ). It was meant to be a deep sea wave and I had the idea that the cape and the big top skirt would be like flowing water but I guess
I didn't pull it off well enough xD
Sure thing! I hope what I said helped. You did a good job but again it was just too much to make me think of water, I knew something about the avatar bugged me it just took me forever to figure out what XD
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I forgot about those! I'll have to go and buy them later. Thanks though!
Sure thing ^^ I have them (with the purple stripe, I think the other gloves have light blue? either way it's not very noticeable) if you want to borrow them?
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Hello! What's new everyone? Does anyone have any critique for my dream avatar? sorry that I am totally shifting the subject. I just don't know if I like the light blue in the avatar or not.
I really like the bottom part ^^ the helmet brings in way too much white, plus it kind of restricts the avatar so a certain theme, maybe you should do something else with the head?

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#5162
Old 05-16-2009, 04:29 PM

I have the teal gloves with the purple stripe as well.

GLOVE BUDDIES!!!

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#5163
Old 05-16-2009, 04:36 PM

XD If I had a buddy for every common I had in common (lol) with someone else, I'd have... a whole lot of buddies XD

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#5164
Old 05-16-2009, 04:37 PM

Hrm, Creps, Are you wearing phoenix pants?
I didn't even know they had something like that.
xD;

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#5165
Old 05-16-2009, 04:40 PM

Yep ^^ they were released just after the masks were in 2007 so I don't think you were around then? Not too many people use them anyway so it's understandable xD;

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#5166
Old 05-16-2009, 04:43 PM

Thanks for the advice, Creps. :3 That's what I was worried about actually. The boldness of the other colors, I mean. ^^;;

Anyhows, I tried to literally take the "Green" challenge for what it was: a green-oriented one. So, instead of adding other colors for complimentary sakes, I tried using greens that weren't as commonly used. ^^;;

Here's what I've come up with, based on the first of my previous avatars shown a page back:
and

First one is a simple try. Gonna expound on it more, but I feel limited by the mask's red beads. D: So, I can't help but add red somehow. ;_;

Second one is something more abstract. :x Instead of the usual white/black/gold/silver highlight, I tried peach. xDD;; Needs work, but the result isn't too bad, I guess...? >.>;;


Now, I think I need some rest. D: Entertaining over 20 people while sick is bad enough. xDD;; But I wanted to bring this out there before I headed to bed. ^^;; <3<3

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#5167
Old 05-16-2009, 04:49 PM

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I really like the bottom part ^^ the helmet brings in way too much white, plus it kind of restricts the avatar so a certain theme, maybe you should do something else with the head?
I need to think of a new avatar. I found the coolest shoe combonation: Order armor boots with panda slippers.

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#5168
Old 05-16-2009, 04:51 PM

You're welcome Rylynne! I like those ones a lot better than the first ones. The first one is nice, I do like that olive green color, I would recommend using the olive green hair color with a real avatar but the mask takes off hair.

With the second one, the peach color is another good compliment color to use! As long as it doesn't overpower the green feel free to use anything (well feel free to do whatever really, it's your avatar after all xD these are just suggestions).

I think out of the two I like the second one best, I really like the cream/peach color with the green. Good job! And I hope you get better soon D:


flea- I've seen that done before, if you can pull it off well it can look great x3

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#5169
Old 05-16-2009, 04:51 PM

Creps, are they a male only? Haha, looks super good....
*thinks about spending more on phoenix set*

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#5170
Old 05-16-2009, 04:52 PM

I'm not sure, you'll have to look? If memory serves they should be in Menewshan Imports and cost around 400g, I could be totally wrong though xD;
The phoenix items are amazing >.> <.<

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#5171
Old 05-16-2009, 05:01 PM

creps: How is this?



The gloves are too bright :(

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#5172
Old 05-16-2009, 05:10 PM

Ugh, I can't afford to splurge on more items!!!
*dies*
:gonk:

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#5173
Old 05-16-2009, 05:11 PM

I think I am getting an idea for an avatar.

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#5174
Old 05-16-2009, 05:13 PM

@ Creps : Thanks for your comments! :'D <3<3

For the first, I'm thinking of duping the mask so that I can expound more on the olive color, actually. =O And as for the second avatar, I'm SO SO SO tempted to add another color (because my normal avatars have at least three distinct/different colors >.>), but I'm scared that it will overpower the green. D: I might add something more conspicuous though, so that it's not that blaring. ^^;;

And yeah, I'm starting to love the peach now too. ^^;; Gonna play with it a little more tomorrow though. No energy right now to MAC properly anymore. D: And aww, thankies for the well wishes on my health. :3 <3<3


@ Hatake : If I'm not mistaken, the MAC says that the pants can be for females too...? o_O;; At least, I had on a female avatar there and the pants were available. xDD;; <3<3


@ flea : I think you need more black and some brighter red on your avatar's top, since your middle and bottom have loads of said colors, while the top is lacking. ^^;; For balance. =P

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#5175
Old 05-16-2009, 05:14 PM

Yeah, there is a female.
I also want the scarf and stuff...
Darn good commons...
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