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03-08-2010, 08:28 PM
@Kiari- please state the symptoms you where going for, I'll be better able to help you that way *nodds*
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03-08-2010, 08:31 PM
These are the symptoms
Quote:
Has symptoms that may include:
- a bad cough that lasts 3 weeks or longer
- pain in the chest
- coughing up blood or sputum
- weakness or fatigue
- weight loss
- no appetite
- chills
- fever
- sweating at night
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03-08-2010, 08:36 PM
I love the use of the red of course for TB.
I think the items you used are simple which works here because they give you the thin appearance. I love the raindrops to represent sweating.
My main issue is the background, I see your point in using it(you where going for the chills correct?) but I dont really think it works all that well I am afraid. TB has Fever as well as chills but your avi looks downright cold.....
EDIT: I meant to mention the Glitched eyes work really well there.
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03-08-2010, 08:37 PM
All righty. Thanks for the input i will consider it. <3
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03-08-2010, 08:37 PM
Your welcome dear, I hope it was helpful ^.^
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03-08-2010, 08:48 PM
The cobblestones at night background might work better if you're trying to represent "sweating at night". I agree that background looks a little strange, especially paired with the snowflakes.
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03-08-2010, 11:26 PM
I just woke up this morning and realized that I have to make this submission in three days, lol. Time to start thinking. XD"
EDIT:
Question: I just realized it doesn't say that it has to be a disease that was prevalent or diagnosed during the period. Should it be? Or can it really be just any disease?
Last edited by Luenola Marxiel; 03-08-2010 at 11:33 PM..
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03-09-2010, 12:15 AM
Ah, interesting one on this round o.O;;; Good luck guys.
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03-09-2010, 12:34 AM
Lue: It can be any disease. That came up earlier.
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03-09-2010, 01:39 AM
Bleh. I can't work on this for now.
I have homework that needs to be done. Yuck.
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Winter Wind
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03-09-2010, 01:54 AM
Haha, same here Suona.
xD
Mene's eating up all my time. T.T
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03-09-2010, 02:09 AM
And I should get off before I dont get my work done. ><;;
Its not much work, thankfully. But I still need to research and get details.
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Cora
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03-09-2010, 02:24 AM
Good luck with work guys ^.^
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03-09-2010, 02:28 AM
Thanks, Cora. :x
I have to do a research paper outline for my anth class
I need to pick a culture to study. Any suggestions.
I was thinking to play it simple and easy and go with Greeks
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Cora
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03-09-2010, 03:33 AM
Greek is indeed simple enough.
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03-09-2010, 03:34 AM
Definently a lot of information on them
Looking into different Ireland stuff, though, and Germany
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03-09-2010, 04:07 AM
Irish history is a very interesting history....I dont know much about germany though.
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Winter Wind
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03-09-2010, 05:11 AM
Critique on my avi pleaseee?
Should I try balancing out the white...?
Cause it's really there just to symbolize cigarrette smoke, whereas the rest of the avi represents a blackened lung.
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03-09-2010, 05:15 AM
Urgh, I know I said I wouldn't give feedback, so I'll keep this vague, lol: I don't think you necessarily have to balance out every color, since you're representing a theme.
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Cora
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03-09-2010, 05:17 AM
@Bri- yeah I said that too lol, I fail.
@Winter-Unless to add more smoke, then no dont add more white it. White would then become pointless. I like the use of the blacks and bowns to represent the blackened lung but the gold kind of confuses me. It does add depth but it doesn't really feel like a color you'd see...
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03-09-2010, 05:19 AM
@Cora- And it's weird because I never gave feedback in previous cycles. ,:C
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03-09-2010, 05:20 AM
Lol, I always did, Well when I saw point to....now its sort of all or nothing though xP
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Winter Wind
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03-09-2010, 05:54 AM
T____T
I'd use some other yellow, but gold is the only one common enough to spread out. D:
The other ickier yellows have maybe two articles of clothing. T___________T
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Cora
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03-09-2010, 05:55 AM
I do see your point hmmmm....
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Winter Wind
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03-09-2010, 06:44 AM
Ah well.
Hopefully the judges will understand that gold is the second best choice if there's no other yellow.
xD
I thinkkk Imma submit. 83
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