So, I drew a picture of my friend's OC.
I guess it looks so-so... a bit too animeish :o
And I hate his pants xD
But I'd be glad to get some comments too.
Yeah and DA link: http://aonith.deviantart.com/art/Oozora-Reizo-98551780

Not bad at all. :'3 N' heeyy. There's nothing wrong with anime. .__.=
I like your line work. :]
The only problem I see is that the angle it appears he has his hips at, the line of his crotch should be higher.

I love anime styles.. although I could just say I love all art, but aside from that xDD, I think you did a really great job, and your line work is amazing

It is a little bit more anime-y then your stuff is normally, but it still works.

Hmm, I think his pants look off because they're so baggy in the crotch. Kinda like he's got them on backwards or they're REALLY badly fitted? :>

haha xD
I guess I should have drawn him in a skirt ... some kilt?

nice ^_^ can't wait to see it coloured =)

One good linework, interesting and nice. I tends to like linearts and line quality.

It might be your style, but I feel that the legs are a bit... thin, not so proportionate with the upper body. I find it a bit... difficult to 'stuck' out the tummy in such degree, the way it twist...

Nice works Yummy =)
More colours please <3

wow!awesome!i think if
you add color it would be awesome but if your not good
at color i think it would be fine to leave it the way it is too :)
keep up the good work

I don't know if anyone's mentioned this before. I quickly skimmed through the comments and I don't think I saw anything about it, but: The hand placement, as well as the hands themselves, bother me a bit. The hand on our right looks smaller than the hand on our left. Also, the way you placed the thumbs... well, I did the same thing with my own hand, and for my thumb to look like that, it has to be pretty much right next to my palm. It makes the pole he's holding look flat. The thumb should be angled down a bit more.

The piece overall is great. I'm really enjoying the lines, and the overall lean of the pose. It looks quite natural. Very nice <3

You're good at drawing hands. There are a couple things wrong with the pose, but nothing wrong with the anatomy that I can see.