
10-07-2008, 11:47 PM
I like how the hair twists and falls about, the texture of the hat is surely amazing, and the line have volumes of its own.
Have you try hiding the lines?
However, I notice there are places to improve? (totally my opinion)
The lines could be smoother, and I found it rather weird of the light patch on the eyelid. It should be darker, then lighter then the blue eyeshade. The same goes with the other eye... although it is shadowed by the bangs, but the 3D ness could also be shown, the skin shades should be one tone lower than the other eye. (hope I make sense...)
I am just nitpicking. haha...
*hides*
Last edited by Zivvy; 10-07-2008 at 11:50 PM..
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