Yes, like the tittle says, please rate my avi.
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Hmm...I think you need some more black on top, like change the hair to a short black hairstyle.

And the yellow thing in the middle doesn't really match the shade of golden-yellow you have.

I think it could used some more items too.

Otherwise, it's a nice avatar. ^^ 6/1O. [ I'm a toughie. XD ]

I'm a pretty tough rater, so I hope I don't end up writing you an essay XD

First off, there are two things that don't match: The red contacts, and the yellow bow. I suggest either taking those off, or incorporating the colors elsewhere. (I'd go with the first option, though. You should probably change your hair to black, or add a black hairpin to even out the black. You also need more items to work with, so that you can play with layers more. You need shorts/pants, a belt, some gloves and shoes. Maybe a gold scarf with a black cutie scarf on top for your neck, since you've already got some white there. Some shoes would help too. 5.9/10

The red in the eyes and the yellow in the bow don't go well with any of the rest of the outfit. Also, you could use some pants or a skirt or something. The lacking piece there makes the avi look incomplete. It's unbalanced.. too much gold at the bottom, not enough black at the top. The black on the skeleton hoodie doesn't match the black in the stockings or other accessories. The gold in the hat doesn't match the gold in the other items..

Sorry.. I'm a mean rater I guess.. I'd only give it 3/10.

I tend to be a kind rater, but your avi is unbalanced. The overall theme strikes me as dark/cheerful, but it's just not mixing well. I actually think the eye are a nice touch, but the chest bow is just too bright of a yellow to blend in with the other yellows. I strongly recommend a bottom. If you desire to show some leg skin, lose the stockings. A short skirt should still give you some skin then. I recommend more dark, to lose some cheerfulness. Nice effort!

Rating: 6/10

The red eyes, brown eye patch, and yellow bow do not match with anything. If you're going for a pirate look the hoodie needs to go. It's just a blob of white and the black doesn't match with anything you have on. Perhaps the black patch instead of the brown. I think you could work the contacts into the outfit if it's a part of the color scheme. The moon needs to go. It's just a blob of gold in the background. You need some pants or a skirt or maybe both. You could use some accessories->belt, gloves, etc. Your white hair is washed out and you have to look closely to even see it. Use the different hairstyles and colors to your advantage. The leg warmers are another blob of gold at the bottom. You need to pick a theme or color scheme and break the color up throughout the outfit. I think you could make a neat red/black/gold/white pirate outfit. My rating for this outfit is 3/10.

I think it would be much better without the black. And the yellow tie...DOesnt seem to work with the gold and white. ANd maybe a different hair style.. XD

I give you a 5/10

I'm sure you've already gotten this but the eyes and the bow seem as if they aren't the right colors to match the rest. xP;; But otherwise the colors all seem to match pretty nicely. (Maybe a bit more black on top.) I'd probably say 5/10ish.

It seems a little bare and I agree, more black at the top.
Other than that it's kind of good. Oh and the yellow tie does not seem to go with the gold, sorry. Maybe try to add the a starry item? < w <
6.9/10

I'll be honest, the eyes make me want to kill myself. D:
The don't fit in, along with that bow.
The eyepatch doesn't even match, really. >.>
I'd suggest replacements for those, and black panties. (Yes, I see the white ones. xD)

No offense, but I don't like it. D: 4/10

*pokes Twisty*

I have to agree with PlatinumChild, the bow and the contacts kind of do detract from the avatar. I don't remember, but if there are black panties in the shop, I think those would look a bit nicer then the default white.

Despite all that, it is pretty good, and I like the overall theme. I'll rate this a 6/10.

weeeelll, it's cute, but from an AC standpoint...

your blacks don't match and aren't balanced; the hoodie is more of a grey while the stockings and anklewings are darker, and the black isn't well distributed througout the avvie. There is none of the brown from the eyepatch, red from the eyes or yellow from the bow throughout the rest of the avvie. The whites aren't well balanced either and are in varying shades of grey (the hat has a bit of blue in it too). The gold is huge and blocky and the shades are different, which looks messy. The lack of shoes or pants make it look incomplete and the colours need to be more evenly distributed...
4/10
sorry, guess I'm tough

Hmm~
I think it's wicked cute~
However, the top and bow seem a bit out of place -- maybe remove them and try a new top?
Also, the hair seems too much blended -- maybe try a darker color?
Rating: 7/10

It does look rather nice - though with some more gold at the bottom, or more black at the top, it would match just a bit better. Still, I like it.

7/10