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Celeone
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12-13-2008, 09:55 PM
These are my two newest drawings. Please tell me what you think ^^
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MurasakiCrown
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12-15-2008, 05:51 AM
I think they're both very nice! Each has a different feel to it with the colors you used (and of course, the tool XD)
I love the bold, vibrant colors in the first one. The contrast between the black and the bright colors makes this very appealing. The only thing I would suggest you keep in mind is proportion. If we could go back in time, I'd recommend either slimming down her torso, or widening her arm. They don't feel like they belong to the same body as much as I'd like it too.
For the second one, same thing: watch out for the proportions: The head is rather large in comparison to the rest of the body, and the hand placed on her chest feels relatively tiny. This could be because of the length and width of the arm. Making it longer and wider would help a larger hand seem more natural. Another thing that looks unnatural is the hair. It looks a bit metallic. Try making it more soft-looking.
Moving on: this is very adorable~ <3 I love the bunny on the hoodie, and the way you bring the pink back with the background. The pinkness of the skin also helps give this a definite softness.
I like your style. Keep them coming ^^
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Celeone
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12-15-2008, 10:22 AM
Thank you very much for the comments, Platinum. I'll try to pay more attention to the things you mentioned from now on ^^
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MurasakiCrown
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12-15-2008, 03:42 PM
You're very welcome ^^
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MoodyBats
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12-16-2008, 08:07 AM
those are amazing.i love the last ones coloring and the first ones
detailing such amazing and beautiful art.keep up the good work this
is really amazing to see with my own eyes.Keep up the good work of
your beautiful art talent i want to see more of it.
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Celeone
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12-16-2008, 07:04 PM
Thank you very much, i'm happy to hear you like it ^^
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MoodyBats
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12-16-2008, 07:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Celeone
Thank you very much, i'm happy to hear you like it ^^
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your welcome.your art inspires me.alot of art inspires me a
lot of amazing art i have seen makes me wanna draw more of 1 of those arts is yours :D
keep up the good work and practice tooand you'll get a lot better :D]
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Liath
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12-17-2008, 04:35 AM
Wow, cool! You did a really good job with the coloring, which is what impresses me the most. It seems the first one was done with colored pencils and the 2nd one was colored digitally, is that right? It's cool that you're that good with both. The outfit that the girl in the first one is wearing is pretty creative as well.
her hand looks a bit strange though. her fingers are too straight. take a look at your own hand and see how when it's relaxed the fingers are bent. Hands are hard though.
Good job, overall. I like your drawings a lot.
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traditionalblasphemy
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12-18-2008, 12:36 AM
Oh very cute, very nice. The top one reminds me of a friend of mine's style. It looks alot like her watercolor work...what medium did you use for it?
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blackbunny
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12-18-2008, 01:22 AM
too cute i love them, ohh the second a me on it BUNNIES!!! :s
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