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Old 12-17-2008, 02:13 AM

This is something I wrote a little while ago and I just wanted to share. Feedback is appreciated.

A simple place
A simple time

I killed a girl
I left behind

Replaced her with
A brash imposter

I gave her wings
Let her fly

Never dreaming
She’d burn the sky

In scorching heat
She turned to ash

Fell to land on
Soft green grass

From the ash
A sweet girl came

Not brash or timid
But both the same

She lived her life
In sweet content

No wicked passion
For passionate death

 


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