
12-20-2008, 06:50 PM
Oky-dokey. So.
It's great that you're steadily working and trying out new things. That's the only way to truly develop and iron out your artistic issues.
I think, in terms of the first one, you totally own the colour scheme, but the anatomy needs work. Above the waist it's cool, but below that you give into straight lines. I would suggest a bit of a pencil under-skeleton, keeping in mind that you need to have enough space to accomodate: a ribcage, a stomach below that, and to either side the hips and pelvis.
Your first lady (With the awesome hair design!) has a flat space where her lower pelvis should be. I can only suggest doing a quick sketch of a pose while looknig at yourself in a mirror in something tight-fitting or your underwear.
What I think you do best is clothing design. There are some really inventive and daring outfits in this batch. :D
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