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Old 12-17-2008, 11:54 PM

Hi everyone!im in a hurryso im going to do this forum fast im about to be late for a celebration party for my uncles birhtday and mine so here are all my recent art so here we go

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08074523AM.jpg

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08075828AM.jpg

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08075649AM.jpg messed up T_T

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08080234AM.jpg also messed up

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08080027AM.jpg

http://i351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08080546AM.jpg

Ok im done well i gotta get ready so by bye leave a comment no critique please

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Old 12-17-2008, 11:58 PM

Not bad ~^.^~ I like the colors on the first one!

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Old 12-18-2008, 03:24 PM

thank you im just a beginner

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Old 12-18-2008, 03:53 PM

Not bad for a beginner, particularly since you seem to be going into the anime style....that to me is harder to master than realism LOL! I was never very good at it.

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Old 12-18-2008, 05:05 PM

it is pretty hard im actaully trying different points of view in the poses...well trying to so far i have failed

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Old 12-19-2008, 12:40 AM

:3 very cute <3

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Old 12-19-2008, 07:50 AM

thank you.iworked super hard on these art pieces

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Old 12-19-2008, 02:22 PM

well at least you have the basic human body. I think the arms and legs are to skinny. looks like your good with color though. keep practicing. :heart:

I'm trying diffrent poses and side views myself.

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Old 12-19-2008, 05:46 PM

cool! you've done some good poses and such. Maybe try a profile view, and try drawing the arms and legs a little less skinny. Maybe it would help if you drew the body first, like they're naked, and then drew the clothes on over it? That usually helps me with the anatomy, especially with different poses. Try finding random photos of people online or even get a friend or a sibling to stand in a pose and draw them.
keep up the good work!

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Old 12-20-2008, 01:00 PM

i have problemswith making arms and legs
too skinny im actually trying
a profile view so far its turning out o.k. thank you for the advice :)

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Old 12-20-2008, 06:50 PM

Oky-dokey. So.

It's great that you're steadily working and trying out new things. That's the only way to truly develop and iron out your artistic issues.

I think, in terms of the first one, you totally own the colour scheme, but the anatomy needs work. Above the waist it's cool, but below that you give into straight lines. I would suggest a bit of a pencil under-skeleton, keeping in mind that you need to have enough space to accomodate: a ribcage, a stomach below that, and to either side the hips and pelvis.

Your first lady (With the awesome hair design!) has a flat space where her lower pelvis should be. I can only suggest doing a quick sketch of a pose while looknig at yourself in a mirror in something tight-fitting or your underwear.

What I think you do best is clothing design. There are some really inventive and daring outfits in this batch. :D

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Old 12-20-2008, 06:57 PM

Very cute hun :]

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Old 12-20-2008, 07:30 PM

thank you for the tips Farthingale i never thought of it that way and thank you
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