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Old 12-29-2008, 10:26 AM

Here's pretty much the only piece have uploaded on the interwebs at the moment... I haven't finished any other decent enough pieces I'm proud of :roll:



It's a simplistic pic of a mechanised angel I drew in Illustrator a while back.
Any comments, or CONSTRUCTIVE crits (I don't respond well to trolls) would be very much appreciated.

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Old 12-30-2008, 03:03 AM

Woah. it looks great. I would love to commission you.

And now my criticism. The wings/top half of the body seem to distract me from the rest of the art, I don't know if this was intentional, but because of the fact that it was more detailed, the rest of the body seemed unnoticed. But that's just my opinion. Again, everything looks great~

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Old 12-30-2008, 05:06 AM

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Woah. it looks great. I would love to commission you.

And now my criticism. The wings/top half of the body seem to distract me from the rest of the art, I don't know if this was intentional, but because of the fact that it was more detailed, the rest of the body seemed unnoticed. But that's just my opinion. Again, everything looks great~
I don't really do commissions at the moment, I do't know how my pics would look when I'm trying to draw straight from an avatar... I suppose I could try though xP
PM me if you're still interested to have me atleast try something out...

And yeah, I know what you mean... I somehow managed to get less and less into it as I went down the body... a newer pic I'm doing has much more interesting legs though, so hopefully that will improve the overall design ^^

Thankyou.

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Old 12-30-2008, 10:41 AM

Ooh, I like, I like.
I did vector art for a time before too, and I know how time consuming it is compared to regular art. I commend you sir for making a rather well drawn piece.

I do agree with Waffle about the top being detail heavy as compared to the bottom half. If instead of making the legs detailed, why not create some scenery that the figure is placed in? Like a Laboratory or a pile of clock gears or something like that. (I know it would be very hard to draw in illustrator, but if you manage to do it, I'd be floored.)

Lovely job and keep up the good work!

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Old 12-30-2008, 05:30 PM

you should be proud, so...i think i got it,ist a robot angel?

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Old 12-31-2008, 02:25 AM

thankyou both.
@Jenova: I'm finished with this one, and like it how it is as I see it as a design of sorts rather than a complete piece. I'll have to take the grounding into account for future pics though.

@kitty: yes, yes it is ;)

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Old 01-03-2009, 01:06 AM

All I can say is WOW. I could never do something like that in any computer program. I really cannot see anything to really critique... Sorry. :sweat:

 


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