Yeah, I tried quite a few shirts. The only thing that layers under corsets that provide sleeves are the space odyssey suits. The white is redundant of my skin, and I have no black in the outfit.

It's alright. Thanks anyway! I think this avatar is just impossible to finish for the time being.

Rate please?

Thanks! Still a work in progress.

Too much orange, and two totally different shades of red, three with the earrings, which seem too bright. The tattoo doesn't look very good with the shades, and the flower pin doesn't match anything except for the dirty-ish shade of yellow kinda matches the orange but not close enough.

The balloon with the lily hairpin, headphones, hairband, shades, earrings, and tattoo seem to be too many items clustered in a small space...

The roses and the bow right across from each other are too close together and overpower the other colors except for the three reds.

I'd suggest losing the roses because without the bow the green of the sash would show through and then you'd have to find something to match that.

I dunno, it seems like you have a theme going, and it looks like it came from a good idea. I don't really know what to tell you. As long as you like your avatar, that's what's important.

4/20 Sorry, it just seems like two colors (reds and orange) are trying to dominate over the others, and the head area is just too cluttered. I do like how you balanced the black, though.

Like I said, as long as you like it, that's what matters.

Thanks for the tips! I decided to ditch the black, and play with just purple, red, orange, and teal. I like it better already. They are hard colors to find matches for.

Im sorry if this is a dumb question but do you rate dream avi's? I will post one up if you would rate it. Do not be mad if this question has been already asked :). Well thanks for reading.

Rate please? ^^

I won't say what I'm going for since someone else figured it out already and I want to see if other people get the same feel.

Suggestions would be very much appreciated. It's still a work in progress, but I'm just not sure where to go from here. =]

Originally Posted by SouLSuRv1vER

Im sorry if this is a dumb question but do you rate dream avi's? I will post one up if you would rate it. Do not be mad if this question has been already asked :). Well thanks for reading.

I'll rate it if you'd like.

Originally Posted by PlatinumChild

Rate please? ^^

I won't say what I'm going for since someone else figured it out already and I want to see if other people get the same feel.

Err, I'm not sure if you've changed your avatar since you asked, so I'm not sure. Is this the avatar you want rated?

Originally Posted by The Broken Telegraph

Suggestions would be very much appreciated. It's still a work in progress, but I'm just not sure where to go from here. =]

Hrm. I don't really like how the face veil looks with it. I would suggest the red bandanna instead, and then either the winter festive hat or the hairpin from heaven to balance the blue of the shorts.

Yup >w<
I don't plan on changing for a while ^^

There should be more atlantis items. ;-;

Here there ^^can both raters please rate my avi!
Acutely any suggestions would be so wonderful ^^
thank you ^^

Well this is my first time on this thread. I've only been on Menewsha for about a week and my avatar is not yet finished. I still need to get wings, a few more items, and the rest of the loveliness.
So how about some opinions! I would really apperciate it.:mrgreen:

Originally Posted by PlatinumChild

Yup >w<
I don't plan on changing for a while ^^

I'm not quite sure what you're going for. It looks familiar, but I just can't think of it. It's adorable, though. <3

I don't really know what to tell you about it. -Is a little tired- But I keep staring at it and I love it. 20/20 <3 I have no complaints except the hair sticking out just over the top of the hat, but you can't help that. So, yeah. Congratulations in getting my first 20/20. <3 <3

Originally Posted by Winter Wind

There should be more atlantis items. ;-;

I completely agree with you.

Originally Posted by disturbed66

Here there ^^can both raters please rate my avi!
Acutely any suggestions would be so wonderful ^^You used the word 'acutely' wrong, even if you meant 'urgently' or 'fast', you still didn't phrase it right at all. Just pointing it out, because it took me a while to figure out what you were trying to say because of the way you put it.

The color combination is very overdone. No offense, but in my opinion you haven't done it all too well. I don't really know what else to say, other than to give you a number. 4/20
thank you ^^

Originally Posted by glimmer

Well this is my first time on this thread. I've only been on Menewsha for about a week and my avatar is not yet finished. I still need to get wings, a few more items, and the rest of the loveliness.
So how about some opinions! I would really apperciate it.:mrgreen:

There's really no opinion to give. You're wearing six items: purple doubled strapped bra, royal sash of Tapio, Atlantis ankle bracelet, shell necklace, silver wadjet makeup, and a heart tattoo.

The bra and the sash don't even match, and though I believe that the Atlantis ankle bracelet and the shell necklace can go well with purple/purple-ish items, I don't believe the combination you have going or the way you seem to be headed is going to do it justice.

2/20

ooo me me me
*jumps up and down waving my arms frantically*

Actually I've come across a problem with layering and not being able to put the bustier of betrayed love on underneath my shirts...and the crown can't be equiped with the chibi top hat but can on MAC *glares at MAC*

But back to reason no.1 Rate me please [L]ove and Cricket...theme should be easy to guess xD

The MAC hasn't been updated for a long time, and a lot of layers have changed since the last update. That's why the hat and the crown will equip together on the MAC but not on the site.

I really don't know what to say about it. It looks kinda cool. I think it would look better with the version of that hairstyle without the bun. Other than that, 15/20.

I actually don't want the items on my avatar the same color, it's supposed to be unique that way. Items that match perfectly is not my goal here. She is a fairy, and as i said i'm going to get a set of wings soon. Also, as i stated, she is not yet finished.

Well it it's so far from being finished, and so bare, why bother asking for advice? If you clearly have your mindset on what you want, you're not really going to listen to those that rate you, are you? So why bother asking?

OMG YAY >w< *dances* I was hoping it would get a good rating because I don't really want to change in a good while X'D

Oh yeah, that avatar is just gorgeous. <3

So why not wanting to change for a while? About to challenge Seiki again? XD

Oh, this isn't about Darrell LOL

I just really don't feel like changing. Same thing happened with the avi Muggles gave me a 10/10 on. Oddly enough, it was the exact color scheme this one had, but looked pretty different.

I don't know... This outfit just makes me feel like not changing >w<

I can understand why. It's extremely cute. I'm kinda jealous. I wish I had that outfit, too. ;;>.>...

Aw >/////<

Makes me wanna draw avi art for it o.e

It totally deserves avatar art! <3 I don't think I've ever seen anything you've drawn. o.O

Anything I've drawn for myself is relatively old. My last finished piece was in Auguts 2008 @[email protected];; You can blame school for that.

I do have WIPs, but the anatomy in them is like.. my old anatomy, too.. .I might not even finish the piece I did WIPs for. It just doesn't inspire me...

Too bad for me I spent like 10 hours on the lineart...

dA

Oh, wow! You're really good. I wish I had talent like yours! -Added you to watch list-