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DeathKitten
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01-15-2009, 02:58 AM
Alright, I shall be putting my past poetry first, then random new ones I make up on the spot. If any of the poetry sounds like somebody else did it, inform me. It seems as though I can make a poem that sound almost like another one... :stare: It was one about Chaos... and spirits rising. That one I'm Not going to put up... ;cause I can't find it right now.
Anyway, here's my first poem... from the past:
To Aunt Connie
'Sadness roams my heart today.
A woman lost, torn away.
From this empty world she goes,
into thy holy rest.'
Short, I know, but I didn't think my long version was all that great... :(
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Kumajii
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01-18-2009, 09:55 AM
It's neat.. Kind of short to be significant to anyone who doesn't know your aunt, because while it's effective, we don't really feel the emotion.
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DeathKitten
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01-18-2009, 05:27 PM
I have a longer version... but I don't think it it's good enough to be put up... The feeling might be better known from that. ^-^'
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