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Old 01-20-2009, 04:30 PM

I will be posting sketches, few finished drawings, and some prints here. I need a lot of improvement so please tell me how to improve. I may be adding onto the thread later.


http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2...awpreening.jpg

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2...womanline2.jpg

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2...blondeblue.jpg

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2...ouredmacaw.jpg

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Old 01-24-2009, 08:49 AM

Well to be blunt

1 - Kind of uncoordinated (if that makes any sense, doesn't to me xD)

2 - Pretty good.. Boobs need to be bigger

3 - Uneven proportions, hips too big

4 - Pretty good, just needs practice and tuning.

Overall they aren't bad but over time you will hopefully improve the styles.

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Old 01-25-2009, 03:46 AM

Thanks for your input. =)

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Old 01-27-2009, 04:54 PM

1. I really like it, its very pretty.
2. I think it's very cute.. I do NOT think the chest needs to be bigger.
3. It's very pretty i like it <3
5. You're really good at drawing these, I really like them. They're so cute, I would so put this up in my kitchen..if I had one.

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Old 02-13-2009, 01:50 AM

Thanks!

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Old 02-14-2009, 06:15 AM

1) You color beautifully~ The colors are wonderfully vibrant and the blend of colors are quite nice.

2)Really cute and your lineart is quite nice. Watch those proportions though, even if it's not supposed to be realistic. Her shoulder on our right is a lot bigger compared to our left.

3) Her hips actually aren't that big but her legs look a bit too long. And I should speak for myself cause I can't work with markers very well, but watch out for color leaks? Very pretty though~

4)I don't know why but I reeeeally love this haha. Especially the part where the read and yellow blends. <3

 


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