Forgive me for no redlines...I am far to sleepy to make that work >>; Mayhap tomorrow if I can get the time.
But looking at it every thing has this odd tilt to it, I see it the most in the area around the cheekbone. So, I have pulled this
photo for you to look at. The lines I see that define the eye socket on your pic seem to come in sharply where as his are more rounded. I think the other thing that is bothering me is the shoulders you see it on the left side but nothing on the right.
Over all I do like the texture you have used, and the petal is an interesting focal point.
