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#101
Old 02-27-2009, 12:34 AM

@Paprika;
-wiggley green thing turns stiff and straight-
I think it likes you! :D

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#102
Old 02-27-2009, 01:04 AM

ROFL ahh thats so bad xD

*Mind falls out of gutter into the storm drain*

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#103
Old 02-27-2009, 02:38 AM

xDDD
-green thing wiggles after you-

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#104
Old 02-27-2009, 03:16 AM

There seems to be a lot of wiggling going on in here! xD

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#105
Old 02-27-2009, 08:59 AM

o.O yes lots of wiggling and no rating!
Where is platty, have the wiggling ones overtaken?

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#106
Old 02-27-2009, 09:05 AM

What is this about wiggly people! o.e

Anyway, sorry for disappearing. I'm on a sort of Hiatus, but came online today to relax. I'll edit this post with ratings if no one posts after me ^^




EDIT

TenTen:. I like this outfit because it looks rich and natural at the same time. The uncovered legs don't bother me because they somehow seem to fit. The avi's relatively simple in terms of layering but there's something compelling about it.
8/10

Risque:. Lovely new avi >w< The balancing and layering is nice, and all the items look like they go together.
9/10

[b]Hime:. Nice colors, and good items. Something about the balance feels kinda off. I don't feel like there's enough black at the feet (it's more on the upper legs) or at the neck. The head area seems fine, though.
7/10

WTFranki:. I rate all users equally, new or not, mostly because I started asking for rates almost since I started out on Mene, so I don' think I can be too merciful >w<;
All the items are from the same event and your hair doesn't really match anything else. I'd work on getting a greater variety of items and some more blue before asking for a rate.
3.5/10. Matches, but not too clever.

Winter Wind:. I've never been a fan of mister big and spiky and imposing item. It takes a lot of black and silver to balance that out, and I don't think you have enough, so I'd take it out. I know you need silver near your feet, but it just throws off the balance more. I've seen your other outfits so I know you can do better, and maybe that makes me biased. The ice blue all comes from the same set, so try to find other items that fit.
6/10

JamesB14:. The color scheme is pretty generic, and so is the theme. I'm not sure how many of those are from the same set or linked set, either. The balance is kinda nice, but I'd work on variety. 5/10

Elwing:. It looks better than before, but somehow still off. The shoulder pads seem kinda bulky, so that it looks like there isn't enough white on the head. I'm also wondering about blue items actually ON your head. Does the blue tiara match the shade of blue you have on now (or one of them)?
8/10

Paprika:. Your avi is so cute! The bunny adds too much white at the lower half, but... it fits with the cute! I'm conflicted! XD
9/10

Bound:. I've been seeing that color scheme around lately. Is there are reason behind it? owo

My apologies to those who were rated if this wasn't the avi you asked me to rate. I've just been busy ^^;

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#107
Old 02-27-2009, 06:21 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by PlatinumChild View Post

Elwing:. It looks better than before, but somehow still off. The shoulder pads seem kinda bulky, so that it looks like there isn't enough white on the head. I'm also wondering about blue items actually ON your head. Does the blue tiara match the shade of blue you have on now (or one of them)?
8/10
I think wearing 2 crowns looks odd...
There are not many matching colors for the head.
I was also looking for a matching brown neck thing,
could not find anything for that either.

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#108
Old 02-27-2009, 06:57 PM

Hahaha the bunny will take over the world!

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#109
Old 02-27-2009, 06:59 PM

You could remove one? X'D

The neck area can be difficult, since the only thing that really matches are the ties and the scarf, which I don't think would fit the theme D8

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#110
Old 02-27-2009, 07:11 PM

Hmm, I don't think I particularly want a rating (because I don't think this avatar is completely done yet, and not good enough to be rated) but what do you think ... slave collar, yes or no?

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#111
Old 02-27-2009, 07:24 PM

I think you can make the slave collar work if you can get some green on your torso area.

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#112
Old 02-27-2009, 09:35 PM

*Coughs basic tee cough* Owait, that wont layer under the bandages will it xD DAMNIT

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#113
Old 02-27-2009, 10:38 PM

No need to apologize real life is more important then the internet.
umm I'm going for a "moon child" I dunno. If it's really popular for a reason.. maybe it's the elimination of the pure white hair and it's about the palest I can get? My friend is also doing the golden crescent moon so are you talking about the moon aspect or the monochromatic colors?
Really I was actually just coming to see if you had a suggestion for my feet.. I feel top heavy, but I don't know of any silvery/black ground objects....

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#114
Old 02-28-2009, 04:57 PM

@ PC;; I'm not gonna rate you (unless you want), but I'm gonna say the colour in the bottom of the shoes you're wearing doesn't match the other shades of gold. And it bugs me. Dx

You can rate my avi if you want. XD;

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#115
Old 02-28-2009, 05:12 PM

Golds are quirky that way X'D I think it's because the gold at my shoes leans towards greenish more than yellowish..

I could say the same for your golds too, though XD The ones that really match are the gold in the hat with the anklets, and then the shade of your hair with the stockings. But having so many shades is really too confusing. I'd put on a red bandanna, change your hair color to a darker shade, and maybe even a different style. Also, find a way to make the golds match better overall. Your avi has a flow problem that makes it look cluttered. Balance out the colors better and I think that will help. There's more white in the top half than the bottom. Try short white gloves instead the white top. The red thing on your shoulders (don't know what it is XD) layers a bit funny with the ayumui top. The top itself is really dark compared to the other blacks. Anklets layer funny with slippers. As for the sword.... I know you're going for a theme but it cuts this diagonal between the wings and the raven anklets and it looks kinda funny to me, but that could just be me... X'D;

6.5
Nice at a glance, but it has some balance issues.

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#116
Old 02-28-2009, 05:21 PM

Do you know any light blue skirts?

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#117
Old 02-28-2009, 05:22 PM

I need some help with my avatar.
But I'm not sure what to do 0_o

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#118
Old 02-28-2009, 05:28 PM

Ese:. I don't really use blue often, but the priest of water skirt has light blue on it. It's also got dark blue, though... I know the space skirt is too bright D8;

Yume:. Remove the legwarmers, since you've got the shoes already. Add something silver instead of just black in that area. Needs more black in the torso area.... white on the head. Not sure if you want an actual rating so let me know if you do. Right now it doesn't feel complete. It looks bare in the "I'm getting dressed" sense as opposed to "I'm showing off intentionally". Know what I mean? o.e

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#119
Old 02-28-2009, 05:30 PM

@ PC;; Your avi looks way better now.
Maybe I should change the whole avi. XD;
What do you think of this avi? Do you have any suggestions for what I should add to it? *likes it a lot but knows it needs more blue in the middle*

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#120
Old 02-28-2009, 05:30 PM

NUMNUM
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<3<3

Something is missing from my avatar. D: I think a pink belt would be nice? =O Help though? :<

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#121
Old 02-28-2009, 05:32 PM

I agree Ryl. I think a pink belt would go nice. :3

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#122
Old 02-28-2009, 05:33 PM

I'm clueless as to what pink belt though... ^^;; Especially in this shade of pink. =O Any suggestions? :3

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#123
Old 02-28-2009, 05:34 PM

Hmmm..
*not sure of the names of the colours of belts* I'll go see what I can find. ^^

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#124
Old 02-28-2009, 05:35 PM

Aww, thankies! :3 I appreciate it. ^^ <3

*is too lazy to go search in Accentuate*
xDD;;
<3<3

You don't have to though if it's a hassle for you. =O Don't wanna be imposing. ^^;;

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#125
Old 02-28-2009, 05:35 PM

preist of water skirt is a dull dead blue grey
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