Hey I wrote this song and i don't really know if it is good or not. Tell me what u think! Thx

VERSE 1

I was at home
singing alone
and my mama was watching me
Everything has change
i was so afraid
and i just had to stop my singing

CHORUS

Yes I'm shy
but i partly fly
if u hurt me
i would cry
but do u know why this happens
I'm just really shy, shy

TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK ABOUT IT!!!!!! THX FOR UR OPINIONS :)

We can't really tell you what we think if we don't know the rhythm or beat. Try recording your voice and putting it on youtube then making a link to it on here.