Thread Tools

MentalCloud
(-.-)zzZ
6502.01
MentalCloud is offline
 
#1
Old 02-27-2009, 11:07 PM

This is a poem that I wrote a few years back to help myself work through some of my issues with my absent father. I hope that you enjoy it.

Daddy Why?

Daddy, why don't you love me?
Daddy, why don't you seem to care?
Daddy, why aren't you proud of me?
Daddy, why must you cause despair?
Daddy, why wasn't I good enough for you?
Daddy, why can't you accept who I am?
Daddy, why wasn't I wanted by you?
Daddy, why do you seem like you're just a sham?
Daddy, why do I still need you?
Daddy, why can't I just let go?
Daddy, why do I still want you?
Daddy, why was our relationship so hallow?
Daddy, why has it been almost fourteen years?
Daddy, why am I still that little girl inside?
Daddy, why do I still cry so many tears?
Daddy, why do you have to hide?
Daddy, why did you break my heart?
Daddy, why are you so hard to find?
Daddy, why did we ever have to part?
Daddy, why do you seem so blind?
Daddy, why haven't you ever come to see me?
Daddy, why can't you see that I need you
Daddy, why is this what our relationship has come to be?
Daddy, I still love you.

xweazelx
1050.04
xweazelx is offline
 
#2
Old 03-02-2009, 02:59 PM

Baby, you know that I love all of your poems. This one is well written and very sad. I wish that I could help you with this problem, but I know that it is something that you have to go through by yourself. All that I can do is be there for you when you need me, and hope that one day you will be able to come to terms with your lack of relationship with your father. But still it is a really good poem. I love you.

 


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

 
Forum Jump

no new posts