
04-02-2009, 08:57 PM
i wrote this one day when i felt a little sick of being not able to be with my cousin ever and im not sure if anyone would like my but i write my own poems of my own free will so don't give me any advice of what i should do on this poem because i like it the way it is.is that alright?well here it is try to enjoy it!its not the greatest poem btw -sweats-
Summer day
Tick tock goes th clock while you play outside
laughing,jumping,having fun.tick tock goes the clock
as we come inside and have lunch all together we all
talk and laugh,after lunch we play games and fall on the
ground laughing because we are having a lot of fun,tick tock
goes the clock as we change our clothes and into our swimsuits
we get into the car and as my aunt drives we laugh and sing funny
songs,tick tock goes the clock as we jump into the pool and swim and
have fun on a summer day as the blazing sun sees 3 girls having a great
summer day.
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