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Old 05-15-2009, 07:10 PM

A bit of Red
A Bit of Blue
A Touch of Yellow
and Silver too

A Simple Smile
A Fancy Staff
Two Kinds of Socks
Kinda makes me Laugh

Silver Hair
A Cresent moon
Some beautiful colors
To Brighten the Room

Someday some wings
Already a Heart
I guess the avi for now
is more than a Start

Maybe It's Finished
Or maybe not
My avi represents me
I'm Random A Lot

It may never be done
That's just the way I am
I like it as it is now, colorful
And I will add more to that 'lil ham


Well, I havn't done a poem in a while, so i decided to just make one, kinda on the spot, just to see how it would turn out. Oddly enough my mind just kind of came up with this o.O

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Old 06-18-2009, 04:00 AM

That's really nice. It's a good poem, especally on something so random. People tell me I'm good at poems but, they don't always come naturally like you said. That's a real talent to have. Ryhming poems are hard enough, and you did that on the spot? Give yourself a pat on the back for me.

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Old 06-22-2009, 03:00 PM

I agree I like the poem.

I think you did quite well, I tend to write things on the darker aspects in my poetry.

This was a lighter poem, and it was based on avatar. I would like to express that I think you did great.

 


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