
07-03-2009, 03:03 AM
Well, I think the colors look fine, only thing that's missing is some shading. Perhaps add a gradient to the sky (perhaps even add some purple tint) and add crates to the moon.
I also feel like her skin tone is too... grey. However, I don't know if that was your intention? Maybe she's a vampire or something lol
Personally, I didn't realize she was there, until I second checked the picture after I read there was supposed to be someone in there. Maybe you should try showing more of her- I also can't really see how are you going to draw the hair is you can barely see her head/face. Other than that, red hair sounds good, it would definitely contrast with the rest of the colors in the picture and really pop-up. You could even add some red-ish color to the sky, to make the drawing look balanced :)
Anyways, good luck! And those are my two cents.
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