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Old 08-10-2009, 04:07 PM

Like the sun
after the storm,
You light up my heart
and made me feel warm
like the whispering
between the leaves
you talk to my soul
with your trembling lips

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Old 08-11-2009, 12:42 AM

*claps* I like it. I love your use of similes! Bravo for you.

 


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