
08-11-2009, 07:08 PM
Please critique
Cherished Life is Easily Gone
As they come out of the crowded cars
And look about them so,
They see their friends go to the left
And cry from joy and woe
“Strip down and go into that room,”
The German he will say,
To go in there is certain doom
For all will be taken away
The people pointed to the right
They never will be free,
Their angels look upon them
With pity they will see
No mercy or compassion
The ordered guards will give,
Labor and torture are great gifts
To the unfortunate few who live
After all is said and done
Hope it will remain,
For the Allies sure are coming soon
To free them from their pain
Friends and family split apart
From a madman’s crazy whims,
They will meet again in Heaven
And all will sing their hymns
Everyone was cared for
Cherished life is gone
As fleeting and as quick
As night is to dawn
Last edited by Sky_jean; 08-12-2009 at 05:35 AM..
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