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Old 10-06-2009, 01:56 AM

I'm new to this site..and it looks like it's one huge forum..I think I might enjoy it actually :] So..I wanted to post one of my entries here in the Literary section for you to check out and maybe comment on??
[SIDE NOTE]Hmm..This place might need some Arena's for competition eh? Or do they already have that??? hehe..Well if they don't I'll be more than happy to post some little forum based on competition of writing or drawing, whatever it is your profession is at. Maybe when I learn to make an entertaining forum post :]

Ok so back on topic XD

Yea, this is just a tid' bit of mine.

Tell me what you think??? I'd like to know I've reached my goal or not :]

Feel free to PM me for any suggestions or requests of anything..Don't forget I'm a total newb.. :B

♥Dahlia Kody.

The crushing guilt.

Reminded by their painful world you wear me down.
Caress me with music that impales and controls.
Keep me before I hit the ceiling,teasing sinister secrets.
Innocent changing to demonic faces pleased our black clouding desires.
Breached promises force your fragile toy to endure harshly.
Climax rising and falling in the act of screaming ring your inviting ears.
Seal the deal with a fake kiss and I lye on the other side of your bed crushed under guilt.

 


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