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Originally Posted by Melody Xyelle
Hey boobles, I've merged your posts. Try not to double post like that ok? Just edit your previous post. You'll get the same amount of gold. :3
It's a good piece. Though, theres something off with the eyes. But I can't figure out how to word what it is. xD Still very good though.
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Actually, since your scanner is kinda bad, It missed out some lines that were vital to the points that I was going to give you. the angle of the right eye needs to be turned clockwise a few degrees, positioned up a bit more, and with a little more squinting.
The top right of the head, for some reason, has a part that looks as if it's been cut with a razor straight off diagonally, because it's so straight.
Overall, not a bad piece, but as you drew it in pencil, you can still correct the facial features and head shape.