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Old 10-07-2009, 12:37 AM

Knowing -+-

Evangilen is a young woman in her early twenties, though, poor and jobless. Lately, she had been having a strange dream, where the world around her is a black as night, and she continously runs on a stone road, while a fire' chases ' her. Everytime she looks back, it seems to grow closer. Though, since she hasen't a clue what it means, she knows it a sign for something,
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Alright. So, thats a short description of Knowing, and as I said, its NOT based from the movie, its a whole lot different. A different setting as well. I didn't like that movie much, but if your here to talk about it, dont. I ONLY accept comments on peoples feelings toward it, do you like it, hate it, think it can be better, ect. Give me tips and pointers. I havent done this before, but, its pretty exciting. Anyhow, Below is a picture of what shes based off of, but it isn't exactly her. And, aswell as the picture is a short description of what she looks like, or, how she is. Like, a profile, I guess.

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Chapter 1 -> First post for the chapter being posted up soon. <- Sorry it was only one post, but it was meant to be that way. Sorry if it ticks you off in any sort of way.

Chapter 2 -> First post coming up. -> This will be a much longer chapter, probably around eight - ten posts. Each post will be 3-5 paragraphs long in total.
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It takes place in London, where Evanglien has grown up all of her life, from newborn to adult. Where the story takes her, im still pondering about that.
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It's 4:51 when she wakes up from the dream.
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MAIN Character
Evangilen

Secondary MAIN character.
Leon > Love interest, he'll be introduced in most likely chapter 3-5.
Leon is a hunter-type sort of person, usually in drag clothing, but, he's pretty handsome when you see his face. Leon is a smart person and is able to make up plans quickly, and, is fast at reacting to certain things, such as, attacks,nearing death, such as that. He carries around a small cross bow, and three pistols, one silver revolver. Leon is a bounty hunter, so, in a way, a sherif. Though, in a more old-style way. He isn't some sparkly vampire or magical gryphon, he's human as well.

Other
Unkown, if you have any idea's, just tell me =).

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Year : 1969
Month: October
Day: 25th

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Evangilen


Evangilen has light amber eyes, and her hair is alittle stringy, with the color of Ash Brown. She is average height, about 5'8. Her skin is a light tan, and scratchless. Shes light weight, only around 134, so, skinny, in other words. She mainly wears a T-Shirt and skinny jeans, which seems normal to her. Not very stylish, and not a big diva who puts on eight pounds of makeup. When needed to, she speaks her mind and creates her own plan for things, which is normal Plan B or C. Evangilen also isn't very good with men, love wise. The emotion seems like it skips her mind, which means shes not a romantic. Shes not strong, but not weak. She'll stand up for herself if a situation got physical, though, shes clumsy and usually trips over herself and stumbles upon words and sentances. Evangilen is a nice person though, once being her friend. Shes loyal and sticks to one thing no matter how long it takes to make it come true.

Leon [[ Coming Soon.]]
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Updates for chapters and such are usually Weds,Thurs, Fris and Saturdays,. Mainly Sunday Monday and Tuesday are busy, so I don't get on much, and certainly not enough to make another chapter. It requires me some time to make a chapter, as you might have been able to tell, I dont have a wonderful imagination where can just think things up in a snap. Atleast its only three days I wont usually update.

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Old 10-08-2009, 11:49 PM

~ Chapter 1 : The Dream : ~

I couldn't stop running. My muscles ached and I couldn't breathe, or, if I was breathing, I couldn't tell. All I knew what that I was on a stone road, and fire was going to catch me. Everytime I looked back, the fire seemed to grow larger and more feirce. But, as I ran, it seemed like the world grew darker, and this road wouldn't stop. I was so scared, so confused. I couldn't stop, my brain wouldn't allow me to stop and look at the ferocius fire growing behind me. But, soon, I was in the fire.

My eyes opened right then. The reason I wasen't in a cold sweat was beacuse of that dream. It was third our fourth time that ive had it now. I didn't know what It meant, and I didn't plan on finding out. All I knew was that it meant something, but my brain was to slow to actually think what. But, now, it wasen't the time to focus on that, I had to get up. Though, I didn't want to, but It was probably weird sleeping under a tree in your front yard, visible to the whole world. I slowly sat up and stretched out a bit, a few glances looking my way... I was in London, where no one cared about many things except for themselves and their relative's, and life issue's. Deciding I didn't want to sit out here anymore, I stood up and walked to my door, knowing it was close to night time, and I didn't want to be stuck out there in that dream again. I wasen't hungry, and since I couldn't afford a T.V., That was out of the way. I guess just wander around, or, draw to pass the time, but, that didn't seem too exciting. Sighing, I just sat on my couch. My name is Evangilen, im twenty-three years of age and jobless. I mainly get money from birthdays or my parents when I need it badly, for food and bills, but usually I dont have very much money to pay. I barely have any lights on, I use the oven occasionly and I take baths daily, so, I guess my water bill is the most expensive... and as for a car, I cant afford one either. Gas prices are a bit nuts now-a-days and so, I walk or ride my mountain bike in the garage.

Since this wasen't all to interesting, maybe I should just lie down to see if I'll go back to sleep. Mopinh to my room, I thought back to my dream. Did I know something others didn't? Or, was this normal, to have a dream like that almost everyday. I shook my head and sighed, There was more time to think later about this. For now, I needed to go back to bed. Coming to my room door, I opened it and entered. It wasent the neatest and most organized room, or, the msot sloppy and discusting. You could say it was hald trashed and half decent. It fits me though, its large, deep blue walls, white cieling and white curtains that hang over the only window. My bed was plain and boring, white. Not a rainbow or all beautiful like other's. Though it wasen't like that, I still liked it. I layed down, and tried to shut out my thoughts, though, only one lingered in ym head still.... The dream.

[[ Note: This was meant to be a short chapter. Usually, in books I read, the first is always the shortest. Later on, they'll start being 10+ posts to a chapter.]]

 


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