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Old 10-10-2009, 04:40 AM

My Christmas with "Him".

I started walking down the long halls of the boarding school my parents dumped me at. It is a actually not that bad. The only reason it is not bad is because of Grant. He is my best friend, but I secretly love him.
I kept walking till I stopped at a familiar door it had a Christmas wreath on it. I decided to knock.
"Hello ?", said grant in a very sleepy voice I almost forgot it was almost one in the morning, but he was used to me coming over so late.
" Its me Lexi ", I said in a nervous voice.
"Come on in", said Grant. He always leaves his door unlocked in case I needed him.
"What are you doing here its 12:50 am and tomorrows Christmas", He said in the kind of playful voice that I loved.
" Well that’s my problem my parents are not going to get me this year so can I spend Christmas with you”, I knew he would say yes.
He looked so handsome sitting in his bed with out his shirt off. His bare skin almost sparkled against the dim light of his dorm room light.
" Of course but what shall we do, how about we go to town get out of the creepy forest".
I loved this idea I think i will tell him how I feel tomorrow hopefully he feels the same way.

In the morning I woke up fully dressed on Grants floor. I looked up to see Grant in only in his boxers getting dressed I giggled like a little girl. I was so impressed.
He laughed also I was so relieved I thought he was going to freak out and be all weird.
"Morning Lexi, Merry Christmas", he said.
"Merry Christmas". The he came over and gave me a gift.
" Sorry Grant I left your present in my dorm”, I had got him a mixed CD of all our favorite songs and a letter explaining about how I love him and all.
"Lets go back to my dorm so we can open them together ok, plus I need to change into clean clothes." I did not have a problem changing in front of him because I always wear a under shirt and boy shorts.
I am not the kind of girl who wears frilly under garments.


In my dorm he took his normal seat on the end of my bed while I got dressed I decided to dress nice since it is a holiday. I decided in a nice v-neck sweater and nice suede pants.
"You look absolutely lovely Lexi", He said it just about made my heart burst if only he new how much I cared for him.
" And you look so handsome", I smiled a surprisingly flirtatious smile.
He smiled back I decided to open presents.
"Ready to open them, cards last ok", He opened my gift and smiled.
When I opened mine i was surprised he got us both tickets to my favorite band."
"OH MY GOSH thank you", I went to go kiss him but I stopped my self and just gave him a peck on the cheek.
" And thank you", He said.
" Ok letters, I will open yours first", I opened the letter and it said:

Dear Lexi,
I wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas in this letter but I also want to tell you something else... I love you Alexis Bell Smith. I really hope this letter does not ruin are friendship if you do not feel the same way. Well I still hope you have a Very merry Christmas.
Love,
Grant

I started to cry tears of happiness a true Christmas miracle who knew, I didn’t.
“What’s wrong I am so sorry I should of let are current relationship be" said Grant in a very sad and disappointed tone.
“No Grant these are tears of joy ok it’s your turn read my card", I was so happy I decided to go sit by Grant. I layer my head on his shoulder.
Then he put his head on mine.
The minute after he finished the card He turned and looked in my eyes and said "I love you" then I said I love you to.
Then out of no where we kissed at first very backward then perfect. I had to stop to breath and to make sure my heart had not exploded. It had not.

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Old 10-10-2009, 04:59 AM

This is a sweet short story. I do wonder though if you purposely left out the physical descriptions of your characters though. And the grammar needs a little work. But I really enjoyed how your quickly set up the situation and I could feel your main character's emotions. And I learned something new too. I didn't know Boarding Schools could be coed hehe.

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Old 10-10-2009, 05:19 AM

Well I wrote this story last year it was when I just started writing for stuff other than school. I think I have improved since then but I don't know I don't let people read my stories much.

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Old 10-10-2009, 05:47 AM

Hey that's fine. Who doesn't make grammar mistakes? hehe.

 


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