Just a few drawings I want some critique on. :3


Axyl



Bunneh



Gaara (Character (C) Masashi Kishimoto)



Vo Spader (Character (C) D.J. MacHale)



Bobby Pendgragon (Character (C) D.J. MacHale)




ALL Drawings (C) Kristen W. (ME)

wow these are wonderful. just a lil deffintion wud help otherwise these are well finished and clean. nice work^^

Originally Posted by MidnightRose

wow these are wonderful. just a lil deffintion wud help otherwise these are well finished and clean. nice work^^

Thank you :3
Shading is a little bit difficult for me, but I'm working on that. :)

You've definately got an idea, how long have you been drawing for? The Gaara shows a good set of motor skills in that hand of yours.

Originally Posted by Lynzel

You've definately got an idea, how long have you been drawing for? The Gaara shows a good set of motor skills in that hand of yours.

:D Thanks !

Have you ever thought about trying to get a job somewhere where you could draw cartoons for a living. I think you could really draw cartoons. Your really good!

@Serita: Thank you! :D
I have thought about it, but I'm not sure where to start.

For the first picture, this is bugging me a lot...
The lines and CGing don't seem to be refined. As in, I can see lots of white spots between the lines and the colouring. But I don't see any evidence of that in your next CG of the bunny so I'm sure you can handle it.

CG specific, try being bolder with your shading. Use more obvious shades, go much darker with your shadow-shades. =]

Thanks :3