maybe its that its almost going for rhyming and then doesn't. It would rhyme and then it stands out when everything around it doesn't. and I guess I was having issues trying to figure out the rhythm of it.

lol well I was trying to sound like the mad hatter if that helps. he kinda talks like that.

yeah, I think it would have worked better if it were pros. you could have made it sound madder that way

i don't think i can do him as well in prose since i'm a better poetry writer. though i'm going to attempt a fanfiction...maybe.

read alice's lie.

*drops from above and hugs (not force glomp tackle)*

I think you could right a wonderful fanfic

*grumbles and trudges off* alright, alright already....

lol well that one is the best one and since you didn't really like the other two I hope you like this one.

I'll try I have multiple hours in a car tomorrow so we'll see if I write or do homework or sleep or read or just chitchat with fun peoples

I thought the first one I read was pretty good. Its just I've seen better poetry from you

in the car tomorrow? ah, friday. where ya going? home?

See I don't like that one at all. I think it's pretty bad. I think Mad is an excellent portrayal of the Hatter. Alice's Lie though I think is just overall really really good.

No. I'm going to Tulsa for that conference.

hm, well its poetry so we all like different ones.

oh right. you never really told me that much about it.

yeah. Have you read Alice's Lie yet?

It' really going to Tulsa to attend a conference and present a paper, not that much too it.

yes, and I really liked it! that's for sure the best of them!

I see, what's the paper about?

yeah I love that one! Can't you just hear Hatter's scottish brogue at the end?

the importance of women to plot in epics like the odyssey

yeah, that one really captured it all

oh I see. what women were in that?

hehe yeah. That one was also the only one I didn't really have to force any line of they just came to me, which is how my best poetry is.

the ones I focus on are Klytaimnestra, wife of Agamemnon, and Penelope, wife of Odyssey

yeah, I can tell that it wasn't forced.

okie dokie! *doesn't remember much of the parts of the Odyssey she's read*

perhaps you've read enough of my poetry you can tell my forced and non-forced.lol.

trust me... I only know this cuz i've spent all this time with the poem

yeah, i can tell.

and I'm sure you're so thrilled about that.

I'm listening to All Star.

yeah totally.

hm I'm listening to songs that are alice in wonderland themed.

again?

but all star is great!

it's great music... nice and rocky.

yes all start is great.

and i must go now. I have to pack (still) and take a shower and then go to bed. I may get on briefly before going to bed but I'm not sure. And i'm not sure if i'll be on at all this weekend before sunday night. So if I don't talk to you before Sunday bye until then. and if classics win you must post a song for me. A beatles or queen song or something.

hm, what's this stuff called? think i can find it on youtube?

of course I'll post some stuff for you!! :hug: cya wings! have fun and good luck! I'll see you later then.

the cd is called almost alice google that and find the song list.

bye :hug:

okay!

:hug: :glomp: :hug: bye wingsy-chan!! I'll see you whenever you get back!

I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

:squee: :glomp: wingsy!!!! how did the conference go?