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Old 11-18-2009, 06:41 AM

Here I'm going to just post poems and rhymes that come into my head.

Some are relevant to my life or the life of a friend.

Some are meaningless to me but simply sound interesting.

Most of my work is improv. I just get in the mood to say something poetic. Or even sometimes I can only describe what I'm thinking/feeling...poetically. So consider this the Manyoshu of my mind. If there is a story behind the poem, I'll tell it. If someone does decide to read this and wants an explanation of something, feel free to ask me here and I'll do my best to help you understand.

Disclaimer:
Don't pay me no mind
Don't pay me one dime
Here you may find
One big waste of time.

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Old 11-18-2009, 07:26 AM

a master of self-deception.
who never answers question.
but in the end one lesson.
a life just full of guessin.


revised:

to master self-deception
you must ignore the question
if the clouds do feel the wind
or if the winds feel the cloud
or do the clouds move because they're told
regardless of which way the wind blows.


revised again:

have i thought myself to be sincere
only to sincerely be
deluded life despite my fear
that what i am is not me?


Story:

For a long time I've questioned the reality of some of my feelings, or of love in general. I mean, sure we have emotions, but are they inate or just learned? And to what extent? And what of it when people delude not only those around them, but themselves as well, into thinking they believe one thing or the other just because it makes them feel better or helps them fit in? Are those emotions then insincere?

 


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