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Old 11-18-2009, 07:27 PM

So tell me what you think. I have never posted before and would love to have any advice to make any of my peotry better. Thanx.


Dreams

I see you in my dreams
holding you not only in dreams
Wishing no one takes you from my arms
Thrilled I am from all you charms

Lips that everyday are mine
Those loving eyes that shine
Lighting this path of mine at night
Guide this leart in its new flight.

Amanda

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Old 11-18-2009, 09:20 PM

Don't:

Don't look into my eyes
They only hold my overflowing tears
Raining down over my cheeks
Don't look deeper to get to my soul
Hidden there is all my pain
Which is breaking my heart
That once held my Dreams.

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Old 11-18-2009, 09:21 PM

Betrayl

Betrayl cuts like a knife
Into this heart that loved so free
Dreams shattered to dust
Leaving only my tears and me

All my cherished dreams
Gone in a second of time
Never to become reality
No more dreams left for me

I have nothing left
No goals to reach
My life has no more meaning
It a sad bottomless pit of ruined dreams

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Old 11-18-2009, 09:22 PM

Soul on Fire

A fire deep in my soul
This feeling so unknown
Never daring to be so bold
The seed has been sewn

My heart wanting that lasting hunger
T'was its only true design
Tired of being a lost hunter
Needing the passion of a lovers eyes

Longing that is new to me
This burning need to much desire
Knowing this love is the key
A heart that is now admired

He only said one thing
It meant so much to me
My heart started to sing
Told only how much he loves me

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Old 11-19-2009, 07:36 PM

My Cold World

Happiness is for fools,
Loneliness the weak
Love the Fool-Hearted,
but no not me
For I have none,
no hope for happiness
Heartbroken to long for loneliness
Love...ha...one big joke
Settled I have into this meager existence
Knowing there is no hope, no escape
This world is so cold, just like this heart
Built strong are these walls
That hid this heart, NONE SHALL PASS
Unbreakable this ice that encases my heart
Bitter evermore, this for happiness broken
Lonely never for that old heart
A heart I threw aside for a world of misery
Gone is the grief that held me fast
Bitter now is my world, the nothing evermore
Hiding in a cold world created for me
From all emotions I hide but two I let slide
Hate and Envy is all I need the only truth
Now and forever it will be instilled in me.

Amanda

 


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