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#1426
Old 09-09-2010, 05:47 PM

Hee no problem. I like feeding people's squibys, even though I don't have any myself ^.^

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#1427
Old 09-09-2010, 05:48 PM

well i didn't have many until i found these little guys... they are called mites and there are sooooo many different ones and me having a somewhat obsessive personality had to have them all.... now there is like a hundred of them, all different lol

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#1428
Old 09-09-2010, 05:50 PM

Thanx Roze!!!!!!!!!!!
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YES! It worked!

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#1429
Old 09-09-2010, 05:51 PM

No problem! :)
Linnea - yes, I've seen all of yours. I was planning on feeding them all, but then when I saw how many there were, I just stuck to the ones you have a picture of in your signature >_<

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#1430
Old 09-09-2010, 05:52 PM

yea i don't blame you hahaha but thanks :)
i usually just click the ones that are my favorites

i love the :ninja: smiliey!

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#1431
Old 09-09-2010, 05:54 PM

Ooh I've never used that one before :ninja:
Another handy one is :headdesk: :yumeh1:

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#1432
Old 09-09-2010, 05:55 PM

i never use the head desk one.... oooo and :pirate: is a fun one!

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Old 09-09-2010, 05:56 PM

Oh! I like those!!!!!!!!!!! :headdesk:

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#1434
Old 09-09-2010, 05:58 PM

:poke::offtopic::heart:
There's actually loads of smilies I've never used before...

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#1435
Old 09-09-2010, 05:59 PM

i don't use those first two... i think i just never have the occasion to use them
i use the heart sometimes though

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Old 09-09-2010, 06:01 PM

:heart: Ulquiorra-sama!!! :heart:


Heehee... I think the off-topic one could come in quite handy

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#1437
Old 09-09-2010, 06:02 PM

:heart: Shiro-chan!!!!!!! :heart: This is getting fun!
And we seem to go off topic a lot in this forum :offtopic:

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#1438
Old 09-09-2010, 06:02 PM

aw you guys found a use for the hearts!

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#1439
Old 09-09-2010, 06:03 PM

It's a hangout thread, there's no such thing as off topic ^.^
The hearts are really quite sweet :heart:

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#1440
Old 09-09-2010, 06:03 PM

i like that the hearts bounce hehe

:P

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#1441
Old 09-09-2010, 06:06 PM

I hadn't noticed but you're right, they do bounce :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Back in a minute guys, gotta go have dinner.

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#1442
Old 09-09-2010, 06:10 PM

happy dinner time!

i think i need to go and get ready for evening... got plans tonight! :D

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#1443
Old 09-09-2010, 06:23 PM

Oh really? Have fun then!

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#1444
Old 09-09-2010, 06:57 PM

I'm baaaaaaaaack
Sorry, I was playing Oblivion :heart:

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#1445
Old 09-09-2010, 07:01 PM

There's a surprise. I got another review for my fanfic, the hp/bleach one and I was so excited...then I read it :angry: I have got to show you what the reviewer put! THey weren't even gutsy enough to sign in!

[QUOTE][This fic is... really kind of bad.

Your grammar is jarring if not awful. You really need to both reread for
errors and get a beta who has a better grasp on the English language than you.
There are errors I KNOW would be picked up by a spellchecker (if you
bothered) as well as the more subversive incorrect-word errors and some awful
sentence structure. But all in all... the grammar makes this nearly
unreadable for anyone out of high school (or even those -in- high school who
have taken their education seriously).

The other biggest flaw is logic. Why in the world would the Kurosaki family
eat with the Dursleys? There are at least a couple of farfetched reasons I
can think of, but you used none, just mentioning breifly it was for business.
What business? You could have had Dursley's boss be Ichigo's mother's brother
or something, and have both the boss and the family (who was visiting
conveniently) dining over. You could have had some kind of aquaintence, even,
that would have been better than the reasons you gave. It was too convenient,
eye-roll worthy, and set up for a very droll story.

I had hope despite these flaws, but then things just... became Bleach. Bleach
+ vague mentions of magic, anyway. Harry's presence changes very little, he
is just kind of a ghost in the background of everything. And your ideas on
some things (like having little to no theory) is, in fact, not practical at
all. A balance of the two is the best way to teach since different people
learn differently, and theory really is necessary to understand application.
A machine or a monkey can be set to -do- things, but only humans have the
ability to see the why/how behind it and really understand concepts. As you
have it, many Japanese children would just fail miserably because of only
application is being taught. I am assuming you are in high school and are the
type to whine about homework.

All in all... I feel like it was a waste (waste = garbage/feces/etc... unlike
how you used it to describe Rukia's waist. Why would something be around her
shit?) of time to read even this far. Nice try, and I'm sure the younger or
less intelligent crowd is enjoying this fic immensely... so more power to you
or them.
/QUOTE]
I don't know about you but I don't think that was called for.

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#1446
Old 09-09-2010, 07:08 PM

Aah don't let it bother you. Witht eh number of readers and reviews you get, you're bound to get a few like that. Just ignore flamers. It's one opinion versus many others.
No fic is loved by absolutely everyone.

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#1447
Old 09-09-2010, 07:13 PM

I know but it DID make me really mad though! I mean, it's one thing to say my writing is bad and I can get that my writing can be a bit messy and I'm okay with that but he/she insulted EVERYONE that was reading my fic and I don't think that was called for. That's the second flame I got so far which I think is pretty good but still...-growls- I just don't think it was called for, that's all.
I will NEVER flame a story! I'll give constructive criticisms, those are good but when a person is just plane rude/horrible about it then it isn't exactly helping to improve the writing.

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#1448
Old 09-09-2010, 07:15 PM

Yeah, also, this flamer must be extremely bored. After all, there are millions of the most awful stories ever out there to flame. Why pick on yours?
I haven't really had a flame... but then I haven't had many reviews.

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#1449
Old 09-09-2010, 07:17 PM

just popping in for a bit, but i had to comment on the flaming bit... that person also had some typos, so i don't know who made them king of the fan fiction world :talk2hand: but they aren't perfect either

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#1450
Old 09-09-2010, 07:18 PM

Yeah, there are WAY worse fics than mine! At least I try and go through all my chapters and stuff to do spellchecks and in my defense for the first few chapters I didn't have a spellchecker or a grammer check so I was doing it all by myself so I was bound to miss some things. -grumbles- I mean, there was one fic I read that made ono sense, there was a spelling mistake at least once a line, usually more, and the names of the characters weren't even spelt right half the time! I won't say my fic is perfect because it isn't but at least it's better than the ones than a lot of fics that are just thrown on the net without the authors even caring about them...
I hadn't noticed the typos the firs time 'round but you're right so they've got no room to talk!

 


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