Setting: its the year 2020. There are few humans left. Most have been destroyed in world war 3. The vampires have taken over and now control the earth. They usually keep one human as a pet in order to be able to feed. What will happen in this desolate world? How will this work out?

Character name: Johnathan Snaith
Age: 3000 years old
spiecies:vampire
Background: He was a prince in his human years who was transformed at the age of 22. His youth forever upon his face he has one quest. That is to kill the vampire who transformed him. A baron Robert Rad. now he is the king of vampires. Johnathan knows he must find a way past all of his guards in order to finally complete his quest. He knows he will do this one day. So for now he waits with his pet human Alyssa.

Picture of Johnathan


Picture of Alyssa


FIRST POST

Johnathan sat at the bar. He took a quick drink of his beer and then spit it out. It was the most foul thing he had ever tasted. He wished to rid himself of the vile taste in his mouth but had no way to do it. He looked down at Alyssa. She was quietly sitting at his feet her eyes distant. He wanted some blood. He grabbed her arm and put it to his lips inhaling the scent of her. His eyes turned blood red as he bit down and took a drink. Alyssa cried out in pain. The other bar patrons who were also vampires ignored the site as it was something they saw on a regular basis. Johnathan stopped suddenly dropping her arm to the ground. The wound healed up quickly as vampire saliva tended to have that effect. Alyssa looked up at him with her dark eyes a moment before looking back down at the ground. She knew better than to speak to him. In the 20 years she had been his food source she never spoke a word to him. Johnathan relaxed himself and went to eyeing the bar patrons.

Character name : Layla
Age:17
Background: Layla is a belly dancer who works at a club at night it is said that her dancing can make anyman fall madly inlove with her.......

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Layla arrived at the bar she walked in slowly with grace in very step she took. Suddenly the lights of the club began to shine upon her and so she began to dance around every man making them want her as there love there everything. She slowly made her way to the stage and began to dance with other belly dancers who soon came out to join her in her dance.

(^^ very nice but heres some help with your posts and description.)

1)dont know if your human or vampire.
2)cant you add a bit more background story try at least three lines.
3)maybe a little more detail in your posts.

Jonathan watched as the girl started to dance around. He rolled his eyes. There was no way he would ever be interested in her. She was not his type. Now Alyssa on the other hand was more like his type. SHe was quiet and obediant. She listened well and did what he told her. He couldnt be happier.

( thank you for the comments ^^)

Layla danced to show off not the beauty of her body but of her soul she wanted to show all the beauty of the human soul.she began to dance with other male belly dancer who picked her up and placed her on his strong well built shoulders , Layla slowly stood on his shoulders and did a back flip off of his shoulders and the crowed gasped in fear but she landed nicely on the ground and the crowed began to clap. Layla bowed to the crowd as well as the other belly dancers the people began to throw flowers at them in delight.

(much much better ^^)

Jonathan sighed. He was bored. There was nothing more for him to do but drink. He kissed Alyssas hand and inahled her scent. She was so beutiful to him. She was much more than just a slave girl. She was his lifeline.

Layla went over to do her second job which was to bar tend she walked over to the bar and began to serve drinks to the people they all smiled at her and complemented her on her dance and beauty she blushed a couple of times and thanked them all. she soon turned to a man who seemed bored the whole night he seemed to be the only soul in the club not having a wonderful time " may i get you anything sir?"

(try spacing your words to make them look neater. ^^)

He looked at her with a frown.

"I suppose you can get my slave some water and you can get me some more whiskey."

He turned back to Alyssa and began to pet her head. He so did like her. She was so docile and allowed him to do anything he wanted to her. He would hate to have to tame another slave girl.

Layla smiled at both of them " sure one second sire she made with his drink and served it to him " her you sir and for the lady a glass of water is there anything else i can get you?"

Jonathan thought a moment and then grabbed her hand. He pulled it to his nose and inhaled her scent. She smelled so lovely. He grabbed Alyssas and did the same. There was a different smell from both of them. It was interesting.

He looked up at her and stood up walking around her.

"Tell me who is your master human?"

" master what do you mean i have no master people are free here and can you please do me a favor sir and unhand me ?"

He growled at her and picked her up roughly and threw her over his shoulder.

"No I wont."

He took off out of the bar with Alyssa following close behind him.

" hey what the hell are you doing put me down right now i am not the kind of girl you think i am she manged to kick him in the chest as hard as she could" Layla began to strongly strugle

He growled and hit her hard across the face.

"Food shouldnt argue so much with me. If you behave you will be treated well if you keep this up then you will suffer more."

He kept walking holding her tight and heading towards his house.

Layla passed out from his hit she had never been kidnapped or hit by a man i guess there is a first for everything

When he got to his place he put her in a cage. He tied Alyssa to a pole close by and left to go run some errands.

Alyssa went up to the cage and looked at the girl.

"Hey wake up."

She pushed on her shoulder trying to get her to wake up.

" uggrhh didn't anyone teach that man that it is wrong to hit or kidnap woman?" layla awoke with a bad headache

Alyssa looked at this strange girl. It was odd. She had never met anyone who was so fiesty.

"He is a vampire. He owns slaves. Its the way he is."

She glanced at the bars of the cage. They were secure she could see no way to help her out.

" what slaves...that is not right you should not have to take that you have human rights or whatever you maybe " Layla began to pull and tug on the bars trying to find a weakness somewhere

(doing really good. I would advise you to try to add a bit more detail. Maybe saying what your characters hair looks like. Add some details of what your thinking would be nice. But you role play well.)

She looked at her a moment.

Its like she was clueless. Its like she had no idea how things worked here. (<<thinking is a good way to add detail to your posts)

She couldnt beilive this. It was so wierd.

"Ive always been a slave. Its how ive always lived."

Layla was taken back by this freedom was one of the many wonderful gifts life had to offer one she could not believe someone was denied that right " no you should be free like a bird you should make your life what you want of it you have that birth right no one can take that from you no man or woman you belong to no one but yourself" Lalya's blue eyes lite up as she spoke.

ALyssa smiled at this statement.

"Humans are not allowed to be free. Vampires are the dominant race. If we dont do what they say then we will be in trouble and they will kill us. We are nothing but food to them"

(wonderful ^^)

(thanks and its thanks to u ur an awesome teacher ^^)

Layla looked at the young slave girl " then he can kill me because i belong to no one but God. Layla was catholic she loved God even though she did not always do the right thing she tried her best to in every way no matter how hard things got for her in life.

(lets try to go for a minimum of three lines and space your words from your other stuff like this)

Alyssa watched curiously. This was most interesting. She wasent aware people were like this. She was used to slaves.

"THis is interesting. I never knew we had a choice."

She thought this was very neat.

(and thanks. Try doing it like this with a minimum of three lines ^^)

Layla looked down at the poor girl with sadness

" what you are living is not life when one is control by another we stop living and others start to live for us...."

Layla looked out through a near by window where she could see the heaven above she then began to pray for help from her one and only leader...

(wonderful that was perfect keep it up ^^)

Jonathan came back and looked at the two girls.

"I hope you two are enjoying yourselves."

He reached his hand into the bar of Laylas cage and pulled out her hand. He put it to his nose and inhaled her scent. He opened his mouth and bit down drinking her blood his eyes turning red from the pleasure of her taste.