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Old 01-19-2010, 07:56 AM

1.Between the Spaces

I thought I could write you away,
Imprison you in ink,
Thought you would stay within those lines,
Between the spaces and punctuation.

I thought I could sleep you away,
Shut you out of my dreams,
Thought you would not dare enter,
Where noone else could.

I thought I could cry you away,
Drown you in tears,
Thought you would rid yourself,
Of all that emotion.

I thought I could curse you away,
Stab you with anger,
Thought you would get tired,
And fade from my memory.

I thought wrong,
Immortalized you in ink,
Ran to you in dreams,
Missed you in tears,
And longed for you in anger,
But I think I can try to move on now.



2.Beneath the Beautiful

To look upon it,
It is Beautiful,
A magnificent picture-us,
But I dare not whisper,
Lest it should shatter,
Lest my words should harm it,
Because beneath the Beautiful,
Lurks my questions,
My pain,
My ever-looming doubts,
But I dare not let them,
Reach the surface,
Lest they should smear the image,
All the while I am suffocating,
Beneath a blanket of Beautiful.



3.Foolish

Sometimes the wind blows my hair,
In soft tangles around my face,
And I think I can feel your fingertips,
Caressing my skin,
But I am foolish,
And it is only an illusion,
Only a trick,
Played by a lonely heart.

Kigome
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Old 01-22-2010, 04:50 PM

Your poetry is very good. keep up the good work.

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Old 01-27-2010, 06:57 AM

Thanks :)

 


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