LOL Spoon, I totally bet you could write something magical.

Kirin : Ohhh lawdddd

@ Kirin:. My book as well.
I like to write about controversial stuff.
My favorite piece was a play I wrote which was narrated by an unborn fetus

I'm just wired that way.

@ Surry::
WHOA. I'd pay to read that.

“You’re not trash; it wasn’t your fault your parents did what they did to their kingdom. Things have changed; and there is still hope for you.” His emerald eyes twinkled as they scanned my face for weaknesses, like he was looking for what I was hiding. “But we’ll have to watch you.” the brightness faded, and a growling tone hissed at me. “Your kind is known for ruthless murders, and if you draw them here, I will personally disembowel you.” My eyes just stayed emotionless, it wasn’t like I could deny my parents actions, even if they where not mine - I was prepared to eat the consequences until my belly exploded.

@Spooneh: Yeah, I am :] Is this too..brash? is the point to strait forward? or does it flow well?

My poetry is pretty controversial I guess. Well not all the time, but I have a certain style that's really similar to erotic-grotesque artwork.

I am thinking of writing a play about suicide... there is a story behind it.

@ Irish:. I don't think it flows well.
Be more ... verbose.

I was afraid i was'nt using enough verbs, lol x]
-edits post-

Verbose means being more expressive

All this talk of stories makes me want to write.
*runs to work on one of her stories*

And to be more expressive you need to use more verbs. 8D

@Clair: Grats on your page prize! :D

Congrats clair~

I don't know. I'm not the greatest writing critic, cause I am very critical. I want work to be amazing.
( Not saying mine is ... cause it's not ) But I like original ideas.

I make for the harshest editor.

ten more pages 'till 50 :3
I like this story so far; but i think im just rough draftin' it. o-o
Im amazingly artistic, i can do eet. <3

I'm really picky too about writing. I'm always trying to improve my own and I'm really picky when it comes to the writing of others'.

Man i hate my connection. :|

@ Surry::
Actually, I prefer people like you criticizing my work.
Most people I know just say "oh, that's nice." and that drives me up a wall. >.>
It's not helpful at all.

I hate that too Clair.
i want them to actually give me input.

hello everybody :D
like my new shirt :D now I gotta save up for the ribbons and buy me some shoes and I'm all hip daddy-o ;D

Hey Gumbo, did you get any snow?

Hello again everyone!!

Originally Posted by Clair Voyant

@ Surry::
Actually, I prefer people like you criticizing my work.
Most people I know just say "oh, that's nice." and that drives me up a wall. >.>
It's not helpful at all.

I prefer constructive criticism to a pat on the back when my stuff is stinktastic. >_>

@ Surry::
Yeah... at least tell me what you like about it and why, if you do actually like it.
If you hate it, then tell me. I'm a big girl, I can handle some contrustive feed back.
So, yeah, thanks for the feed back.

Maybe you can critique my work another time. *shrugs*

I feel the same way guys. It's so NOT helpful for people to just say they like it.

I feel the same way for when you are going through something and you tell someone about it and they're just like , "Aww sowwy D:" That does NOT help.