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Old 03-05-2010, 12:19 AM

A Girl Once Loved an Angel
-SJU
For CGB

A girl once loved and Angel,
Oh how she loved him so.
He made her laugh and smile,
When all she wanted was to cry.
He showed her beauty,
Asking little in return.
He made her feel beautiful,
When all the world around her caused her harm.
Then one day she made a mistake,
As all humans do.
She fell into the arms of another,
An Angel of Darkness.
Then the Angel of Light stopped telling her,
That he loved her everyday.
She regreted her mistake,
And longed for his love.
The Angel had to go away,
Before she could tell him.
She couldn't find the words in time,
To tell him how sorry she was.
Now she waits for the chance,
For now she has the words.
She only hopes he forgives her,
And tells her he loves her once again.
And she prays that one day he will hold her in his arms,
And she can finally say the words she needs to say.
She longs to tell him that she loves him,
And that she feels as Beautiful as he says she is.

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Old 03-05-2010, 07:37 PM

“A Heart of Pure Gold”
-Sarah Uher


Soft sad brown eyes,
Warmth of a friend.
He runs with grace and beauty,
Until the mud puddle calls.
No one understands who he is,
He is still but a child.
Why do you judge him like you judge your own,
Cruelly and unjust?
He protects someone you love,
Yet you still don’t accept him.
You call him an ignorant dog,
I call him my friend.
I see what he trully is,
A loving caring life.
His soul shines with the pure light,
Of a thousand burning suns.
And in his chest,
Beats a heart of pure gold.

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Old 03-07-2010, 12:54 AM

"A Thousand Masks”
By: Sarah Uher


Cold as the artic; hard as steel,
I face myself.
In the cold dark night,
I cry my sorrowfull cry,
Begging for something more.
Dark and desolate words,
Hang mute.

I build a thousand masks

To hide myself,
To suffocate myself.
Inside these masks I see my path,
Covered in blood.
As I walk this path,
My soul seeps.

I build a thousand masks

Everytime you think you’re helping me,
You lash out at my soul instead…

I build a thousand masks

For god’s sake,
Don’t listen!
What they tell,
Is only a lie.
They say I’m calm and in control,
That I control the mighty storm.
I’m the one controled,
I’m the one bruised and battered.
My “friends” hold the whip,
Each lash destroying me.
A scream of desolation,
A bloody talent used to cry out.

I build a thousand masks

You have the power,
To wipe the cold stare
of the living dead,
From my eyes.
Breathe into me,
Make me whole again.
Bandage my battered soul,
Make my soul heal and be strong.
And give me back what I once had,
A golden light of purity.

Where are you?

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Old 03-08-2010, 04:06 AM

Hi, Broken-Destiny!
As everyone's only allowed one poetry thread, I've merged all of yours together. Be sure to take a peek at the poetry subforum rules and shoot me a PM if you've got any questions. :)

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Old 03-12-2010, 01:42 AM

"A Thousand Masks”

Is a very good poem. I like how you used your wording. ^^.

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Old 03-21-2010, 08:10 PM

Thank-you very much. I actually won second place in a poetry contest with that one ^-^

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Old 03-21-2010, 08:31 PM

Yes, indeed I love your "A thousand Masks" Well written. :yes:

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Old 03-22-2010, 01:15 AM

“The Great Hunt”
By: Sarah Uher

The Dragon Reborn

He stands all alone,
Against Saidin’s song.
He’s hunted by the dark,
He hunts Ba’alzamon.
Saidin sings and he obeys,
He touches the taint.
A taint that sends him to madness,
A madness that broke the world.
He must fight Ba’alzamon,
He is the Dragon Reborn.

The Lucky Gambler

He roles the dice’
He surprises them all.
A game of chance,
He’s the master.
He never fails to win,
The Dark One’s luck.
He blows the horn,
And the ancient warriors come.
They fight the foes,
From the other continent.
He is the Lucky Gambler,
He is Matrim Cauthon

The Wolf Brother

He feels the wolves,
They call to him.
They think of him as one of the pack,
He just wants to be normal.
His yellow eyes see what we can not,
His nose smells us and our emotions.
His ears pick up what we can’t,
His guardian is hopper.
Hopper; the wolf who wants to fly,
Hopper; the one he felt die.
He is the Wolf Brother,
He is Perrin Aybara.

The Three Ta’veren

The wheel weaves around them,
They change everything they touch.
They are the ones who will save the world,
Or will they destroy it?
They meet their friends,
They change their lives.
They will Change the World,
They are the Ta’veren,

Author's note: I wrote this poem after the second book in the Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan. My only regret with this poem is that I was never able to send it to Robert Jordan before he died, may Mother Gaia welcome him into her gentle embrace. I hope you all enjoy it ^-^

 


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